hehe i wrote "lean2"... lol
hehe i wrote "lean2"... lol
word Ian I got you tomorrow
and thanks everyone
new here,i guess there's a crits4crits policy here so here are some crits
graff J up-go simple
nose2-sexy shit but i would get rid of the shit on top of the E, i like the coloring on that letter,funky
lean-like they said,go simple
well that's it for now,i would really appreciate some crits on this,the letters are just freestyled and the coloring is done with these
so yeah,it's shit
Not sure where to go from here. I need to get hold of some pencils & rubbers coz im tearing through pads with these ball point pens.
Graff J Up - the smiley face in that O kinda kills it
Nose - Aside from the colours on that piece it looks quite good
DamoOne - Not bad but try single colours. Im new here but alot of the criticism i've seen is ''block letters''. Try that style and see how it works out.
EDIT: i have finished that peice but ill upload it later
Last edited by LeanOne; 02-17-2011 at 09:45 AM.
it looks like youre sketching your lines really slowly, cause they look all shaky...do your lines in one quick motion, don't be scared to fuck up, its just paper...so eventually when you paint and whatnot it wont take you 20 minutes to sketch out a straight letter...more like 1....or 30 seconds..
not my best but i gave it a shot
word....w's are hard arent they
Ian - Looks clean but i'd say on the top line of the E it shouldn't bend back down if you get me.
W is my least favorite letter. Idk why i used to write waze. it was a toy name and my W's always looked retarded
I rarely do W's but i find putting the outside bars like / and \ works.
The Second W looks legit
wud up bs toys... been a while since i posted, this site is a great insomniac escape... i thought id share some newish shit that hasnt been covered up yet
oh and wud up to zewl and mone... i might have time for exchanges soon so pm me if u want in fools...
sick as always zookyrock
Some sick shit there zookyook
Thepekins - only thing i dont like is the arrows. I think they'd look better if they were like >
thanksh guysh.... i use one4alls and decos... most of what i posted was with the one4alls, im tryin to cover every page of my blackbook, even pages with a lot of tags and throws all over them... those throws and straights are over top of multiple layers of paint and ink... and ill say it again one4alls are the best paint markers out there
i like ur handstyles somber, looks like u could tweak them just a little and they could be oneliners.... the arrows dont look bad... the bars are decent, just get ur 3d perfect and add highlights and that shits gonna jump off the page
ehh new word first try at it
Eh, I'll take crits, changes my name to Mesh instead of Mesa, I don't think it is taken? Am I correct, I tried to search for Mesh graffiti but didn't get anything so.... I'm gonna hope the name isn't taken.
Nemor - always enjoy your shit
Pekins - It's not bad, but I just dislike that style, idk why
KUSH - not digging it at all sorry