not my best but i gave it a shot
not my best but i gave it a shot
word....w's are hard arent they
Ian - Looks clean but i'd say on the top line of the E it shouldn't bend back down if you get me.
W is my least favorite letter. Idk why i used to write waze. it was a toy name and my W's always looked retarded
I rarely do W's but i find putting the outside bars like / and \ works.
The Second W looks legit
wud up bs toys... been a while since i posted, this site is a great insomniac escape... i thought id share some newish shit that hasnt been covered up yet
oh and wud up to zewl and mone... i might have time for exchanges soon so pm me if u want in fools...
sick as always zookyrock
Some sick shit there zookyook
Thepekins - only thing i dont like is the arrows. I think they'd look better if they were like >
thanksh guysh.... i use one4alls and decos... most of what i posted was with the one4alls, im tryin to cover every page of my blackbook, even pages with a lot of tags and throws all over them... those throws and straights are over top of multiple layers of paint and ink... and ill say it again one4alls are the best paint markers out there
i like ur handstyles somber, looks like u could tweak them just a little and they could be oneliners.... the arrows dont look bad... the bars are decent, just get ur 3d perfect and add highlights and that shits gonna jump off the page
ehh new word first try at it
Eh, I'll take crits, changes my name to Mesh instead of Mesa, I don't think it is taken? Am I correct, I tried to search for Mesh graffiti but didn't get anything so.... I'm gonna hope the name isn't taken.
Nemor - always enjoy your shit
Pekins - It's not bad, but I just dislike that style, idk why
KUSH - not digging it at all sorry
click the images tab when ur googling names mesh....
but since u took the time to make a lil simp ill crit ya...
i think ur H is a bit too blocky compared to the other letters, and the S hides it too much... try drawing out every letter individually even though they overlap, then when u go back u can choose which lines to keep, and have letters overlapping different ways and poking through each other.
i see where ur vanishing point is so i can tell u know how to 3d, just make sure its right, it looks like the 3d in the top parts of ur letters isnt pointing down far enough, and on the bottom half of the E its kinda just wonky, i nitpick i guess but im tryin to help... use a ruler to line everything up to that point if u have to
Last edited by Zookyook; 02-19-2011 at 06:15 PM.
Thanks I appreciate the crits, and yeah I know my 3d is off at points.... don't have a ruler so when I freehand the 3d sometimes it is off (especially the E), kinda surprised you didn't rip apart my M (bars are way off now that I look at it.
I may switch my name to something with ESH in it, maybe DESH or something, idk....
u clearly have paper lol all u need is a straight edge....
the left middle bar of the M doesnt match up... but the whole right side does, and that side of that letter is the cleanest part of the whole simp lol its not too flashy or blocky... try to make all of ur bars more like that on the ends and see what comes out
Yup there it is hahaha I saw that after I posted the pic and was like 'oops bad bar' hahaha thanks for the crits Zook!
D's are sick to start names off