rask i like those letters, id say flare that S out more at the bottom to match the other 3 and lose that background but it looks good.
fear you gotta work with bars more on that, the top of the F, bottom of the F, top of the E, top left of the A, and pretty much the whole top of the R are fucked up. lose all the fancy shit and get your letters together
quick sketch i did for the girl, i like the way it turned out, crits appreciated
dont say you hate graffiti thats not cool...
one crit for you ian... dont give it to her. . . hehe just kiddin the bottom of the C is bad, top of the t and a , dont curve them likke that tooo
haha, thanks bro, i know im no king but she doesnt know a thing about graffiti, ill make some tweaks color it up and she'll think its hot shit. The main things i think is the bottom of the C and the top of the T. i actually like the A, and im wonderin about the extension on the H. tried to kill some neg space but is it bad?
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Werm- nice R, I feel like the W and M are too simple for the ER tho.
Fear, your letters look like they got potential you just needa lose the extra shit around them and work simple for a minute.
Trying a new style, fuckin with connects
well thanks for skippin right over me
Yo ian no hate, by why the hell do you post so much. like how long are you on BS a day? you have like over half the posts on this page
just depends on the day TBH, im at school and i usually dont have much to do during the week so ill draw up some graff and hit up BS, just a way to pass the time really. And i also dont just like sit on here and refresh the page, i just check in a few times a day. I like to see what other people post and say, the more graff i see and the more i can draw the better ill get
yo Ian it looks pretty decent, like someone else said fix the bottom of the C, and on the A i think you should take the middle bar going across and bring it to the outside of the right bar, if you get what im sayin. And the R and I are really cramped up
thanks dude, im also tryin to decide if i should do 3d or a drop shadow, any suggestions?
either simple 3d to the left, straight drop down 3d, or make it all go to the bottom center
ahaha chill. I probably thought it was another one of fear's sketches. whatever, space your letters out more, try some 3D, tighten up the S, and work on the A.Originally Posted by ian
ha no worries dude, cant really space em out im outta room on the paper and im gonna throw some 3d on it. whys everyone hatin on my A lol i like it
take 2?
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ye yeeeeeeeee color that shit, she'll get wet......P in VG for good ol' Ian...yippeeeeeeee
ians got moves
the "i" with the heart is wack..everything else is improving.
a couple freestyles i did recently in school
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