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    im thinkin most people here need to go a bit more simple

    and can i have some fucking crits?!
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    Its crap but i was doodling on a water bottle

    Letters are ugly as hell but at least i tried. Any suggestions?

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    Kinda old just messing around.crits appreciated as always.


    Gast really liking that 4th one
    Tempo it looks like you've just reposted the same 3 or so pictures like 12 times. Are they any different? Not trying to rag on you it just seems I see them every time I log on.
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    Just messing around kinda old. Crits appreciated as always.


    Gast really liking the 4th one
    Tempo it seems like you've been posting the same 3 or so pictures over and over again. not trying to rag on you or anything its just all I see when I log on
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    Just messing around kinda old. Crits appreciated as always.


    Gast really liking the 4th one
    Tempo it seems like you've been posting the same 3 or so pictures over and over again. not trying to rag on you or anything its just all I see when I log on

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    Quote Originally Posted by ian View Post
    ^just submitted it, hopefully itll go through
    Best thing I've seen today hahaha
    hope it makes it....

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    Tasty - The way you leave your bars intact without erasing them gives me a headache on some of them, the bars are fine but I just wonder if erasing a little would help.

    Sore - I like the throw, the R is messed up but all in all I think it is alright. On your piece I don't like how you overlapped the letters, it just doesn't look natural or normal. space the letters out more.

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    sore - keep at it. your doing everything right. you might want to take a look at tastymcnasty if you want to start developing your bars.

    tasty mc nasty - whats up with some colors? rack up some sharpies if you need to. shits clean
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    keyboard letters, bro.

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    Just started this one

    thinking of a pink fill. Blue force

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    try keyboard letters. i can't even read that.

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    female - looks like it says sone. add some more style to it. that bomb is simple. make a new one if you are trying to be serious

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    Alright ima finish it and do another one with your advice

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    Sure you fucking can get some crits. What does it say anyway? Soar? and the 2nd to last one I can't quite follow SHHDE? The S's are alright Can't say Im digging the whole bowling ball cube thing that is the "O" the extension on the "A" messes with me but the one on the "R" is alright all in all its pretty good just not digging the overall flow. Try fading your 3d into nothing " erase the back of it so it fades into the background. Just came to me it most likely will look good on your piece.

    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    im thinkin most people here need to go a bit more simple

    and can i have some fucking crits?!

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    @FuckTheFame Do you want me to style all the letters?

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    Tasty- Doesn't flow, try sharpening up some of your bars
    Sore- Same letters everytime, I've seen no progression
    Youth- Diggin the 3d

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    @female - have some flair. but remember that less is more when your still new

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    cant wait to get this keyboard letter thing on point. I'll keep trying an one of these days it will get there.
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    ^ the only reason people are telling you to do keyboard letters is so you can get down letter structure, its not bad to experiment its actually good.
    My crits are to bring your letters closer and add a 3D or something

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    ok sick i tried.
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