get rid of all the fuckin arrows
a lil sum
make your m p and o look like your t and e. then do that 300 times. also make your bars on your t and e straight. and rack some pencils
looks nice but fill the e's hole in solid black the letter are nice and clean though
take away all the arrows and other S*** and make the letters more simple
have less gaps inbetween the letters and get rid of the background behind it
the first was isnt that good too many arrows but the second one is way nicer letters are straight and look nice but the L looks too bent at the botom imo
That looks much better, Flat! Haha I mean, the arrows, I guess that's just your style, but it looks way too complicated. This one looks real good. Maybe take out the little extension in the T, and if that is a tag to the left of it, work on that.
dont call me a hater when youre the one tryin to be like saber or some shit\
and like everyone else said...that looks a hell of a lot better
just banged this one out super quick not the best
the a is kinda balls
i fucked up on the N
the g looks nice but the rest doesnt seem to match it all that well too straight
Last edited by chiefy; 02-23-2011 at 07:18 PM.
much better, but try doing simple keyboard letters as well
i ono i thot that wat i wa doin
^^reading that made my head hurt, and those arent keyboard letters, they are simple, but your T is straight hurting, the whole thing would look better if you had a round O instead of making it square and fix the T. Also, the top part of your E is dominating the bottom bar, makes it look off. and the middle bar looks like it should be a little longer. actually, just shorten the top and bottom bars on your E.
Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.
ya rehz, i feel ya.
Chiefy- I like it . the "N" isn't too bad I'm sure It would look tight as hell when you get how you like though.