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    Tasty- Doesn't flow, try sharpening up some of your bars
    Sore- Same letters everytime, I've seen no progression
    Youth- Diggin the 3d

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    @female - have some flair. but remember that less is more when your still new

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    cant wait to get this keyboard letter thing on point. I'll keep trying an one of these days it will get there.
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    ^ the only reason people are telling you to do keyboard letters is so you can get down letter structure, its not bad to experiment its actually good.
    My crits are to bring your letters closer and add a 3D or something

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    ok sick i tried.
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    Name:  IMG_0203.jpg
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Size:  79.5 KB i tried to make it simpler and have the letters more clearly look like the intended letters.input?

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    1:Gast
    2:Gast
    3:Gast
    4:Gast
    5:Late, Gast, Zerg, Break
    6:Shut
    7ld man
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    This whole page sucks.



    A piece i did on my homie werm's desk

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    Isaac - should try doing straigher letters
    SHUT - there nice but i'd keep them simpler imo
    Gatsoi - id say they all look really nice and clean apart from the one with an eye in the e which i aint feeling

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    @gats nice simps
    @shut go simpler for awhile but u have got alot of potential
    @issac yeah man back to the keyboard for you
    and heres mine guys i was ina hurry so somthings are off but itll do prob. gonna go paint this soon so ill have the flick for yall!

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    gast is a beast...just gonna say it
    jigsaw - nicely done on filling that in. lets see more man. a piece without chars would be refreshing

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    Quote Originally Posted by ViniVidiVici View Post
    Tasty - The way you leave your bars intact without erasing them gives me a headache on some of them, the bars are fine but I just wonder if erasing a little would help.

    Sore - I like the throw, the R is messed up but all in all I think it is alright. On your piece I don't like how you overlapped the letters, it just doesn't look natural or normal. space the letters out more.

    Im gonna redo that one, cause i couldnt fit the E and where should the leg of the R come out.

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    @jigsaw first 2 letters are steezy, not diggin the last two, on the E i dont like that tongue thingy you put on it, and it looks like u through that N on there without takin the time to make 1 match... looks like a throw N to me. also not a fan of the shadow color change


    ^i managed to fuck simple ass 3d up
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    ignore top one
    ribcage- you should keep it allone color it would look nicer

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    That S is in so much pain I hurt for him....

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    I'm just gonna say everyone on this page besides MEWN and REACH use bars and don't post your pics if your not gonna even attempt to make your bars good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FuckTheFame View Post
    gast is a beast...just gonna say it
    please tell me that was sarcasm. . . please.


    @vinividivici - you said it man, this page got no bars

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    wish y'all was wrong bout that. lol

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    then again fortunately your not.

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    ^did that really take 2 posts to say? I realize that this post is just as pointless, but fuck, 2 posts for something that is not constructive to the thread at all in a row 1 minute after eachother?! damn *****


 

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