-Youth dope as always keep up the good work! i need to get back to you on that exchange..maybe when im a little better! i promise
-Dosh really like the whole 3d thing going on but i think you said it yourself about the D
-ERKL? top one is dope but i think its the proportion thing just making it look right ya know? oh and dope handstyles man from what i can see!
Last one for tonight im off to bed its 2 am here hahaha
Splrt - much improvement, but the 3D/shadow is off at points, also a few of your bars are a tad messy still, but it still is a lot better.
two more, tried to give em more flow
youth-dope style, i like your colorful fills a lot
splrt-better, but still not there, you need to do some more keyboard letters to learn how your letters are made up of different bars then incorporate the same bars into your pieces, a few of your things just dont quite line up right
erkl-those are all pretty good, although i hope the first and last say urkl because if not that is some kinda fucked E
i'm pretty toy i know, but i am really rusty because i haven't done graff for a few months. i did a quick piece in class and wanted some advice with it. here's a picture...
any thoughts? don't like the D, messed up the shadow too as I used a bold tip
thanks bro. i have some crits for yours,
-it's well structured and it's good you didn't go all try hard on it
-dope character next to it
-the fill is really interisting
but you should of done it bigger since it looks like something that would be on a train
KAWT, that piece is incredibly messy... Take it alot simpler. Drop all of the whack extensions, they mess up your letter structure and make it hard to see whats a letter and what isnt. Your bars are also very uneven, you should work on the proportions a bit more.
I cant stress this enough, those extensions are ruining the piece.
Noise - what Urks said, the first one is nice but not the extensions
Kawt - Start over completely and use bars and/or keyboard letters
WMD - Some serious flaws in it, 3D is not correct at all. The letters themselves need work, use bars, and I hate to say it but the karak is not dope as KAWT claims....
New to this forum crits welcome
I like them, but not the last one, first one is iffy too. I would say the second one is the best but the A is slightly confusing.
New old stuff, basically just tried to fix some of my old doodles.
Tried to fix the D and N bars
Tried to fix the D bars and the O
Tried to make the D bigger to look better
Ds are killing me lately, hard to find good ways to manipulate the bars but still retain the letter.... If that makes sense....
Last edited by ViniVidiVici; 03-16-2011 at 12:13 PM.
Noise~ I like the bottom style a lot better, Keep it simpler. heres a mod I did of it..
Youth~ Its dope just watch the leg of the Y keep it as simple as the rest of the letterss
Last edited by MadHeat; 03-16-2011 at 12:23 PM.
Random sketches today during a lecture
i made 2 simples one with bars. maybe my simples look a lot neater and better...
more from class lol, similar to last, took your advice and lost the large extensions
NAH, whats up with that wird thing on the N? dont break your letters and lost the cuts on the N and A, work on your bars, make them consistent, the left of the A has a funky bend in it, the middle of the N is too thin, and the middle of the A and H are also kinda thin. the bottom left of the N is weird too
SPLRT, those are both pretty fucked, your bars tend to get thinner around curves and fatter at their ends and when you take them through other bars, they dont line up. you really need to do some keyboard letters to get their structure down.
MadHeat, thanks for that sketch, ill keep those changes in mind. you're stuffs lookin pretty good, pretty clean, although im not feelin how thin parts of the bars are on that last bit.
ViniVidiVici, the DO on the first one aren't bad, but the NE are pretty fucked. second one is decent at best, the last one the only good letter is the h, also the S in your handie needs work
KAWT, first is alright, the second one is pretty fucked though, especially that A. id like to see the bars for that lol
EDIT: another one i just whipped up, don't think Y's are a good letter for me lol
and all you nigguhs need to get over to the battle thread and vote on the round robin
Last edited by ian; 03-16-2011 at 07:40 PM.
ian - the first on has bars but the second one didn't. and on the sketches, the first one is dope with a nice background but you should try some new shit with your style. the second one is good but you randomly changed your name and people usually don't like the letter Y anyway. and your S should have been bigger or just positioned more down