FRY do them bigger and dont even bother coloring them yet. use bars too
FRY do them bigger and dont even bother coloring them yet. use bars too
Mkay... what do you mean by bars?
Last edited by "FrY"; 03-31-2011 at 09:42 PM.
safeway.. it kinda took me awhile to read that. you're S? first one looked like an A or a J. and the last looks like a D but was easier to figure out as an S for awhile.
idk.. i'm new to writing so maybe it's just me.
im appreciating all this feedback. i'll try n clean it up.
First attempt at anything beyond basic block.
advice???
yea i dont like the color or how the S or E are infront of everything else either.
You overlap letter weird so you can barely see some of them, the T is barely visible and half of the first E is covered up.
*update*
few flicks
Yea noticed that. Prob would have done the 3d so the s and e dont look like they are infront of everything else.Originally Posted by ViniVidiVici
no more updates please, you don't need crits on every letter you do... it's a sketch, not the sistine chapel's ceiling*update*
stop raiding the thread and we'll crit you on it once you post the whole thing
kthx
Last edited by Phat 2; 04-02-2011 at 04:11 AM.
what do you think
Humr yours throws are hot but you handstyle is sooooooooooo weak
tell me what you think
^dont like the one a few posts up. the 1st 1 on this post is tight though letter wise, not diggin the colors tho
hey guys. i'm working on a memorial piece for a bloke my friends all knew. it's gonna be a simple piece and me and my mate will be painting it, need some crits for improving.
just get all the bars to be the same width, maybe flare the bottoms of the j and c, the legs or top of the a, and some bars on the k, I'm not sure you're ready to be messing with bar flares yet tho, so id say just fix your bars' widths
and get all your shadows right. you got some mistakes here and there.
I hope you got decent can control to pull some clean lines off.
you dont need 2 dudes to paint this... oh and no need for a heart, yeah ?
yeah i understand. i'll stop the line flares and take off the heart, i only did it because another of my mates did a piece for jack with hearts. and, how do i "flare the bottoms of the j and c, the legs or top of the a, and some bars on the k"? thanks
@kawt- I like how simple it is. Truthfully, I think the heart is fine, especially considering the circumstances. Just my opinion, though.
Scaling of each letter is off. I have to make the "W" bigger and level out the whole thing in general.
Just an idea. Not sure if it's simple enough or what.
@mindtrix350 thanks, i might keep it, i dunno. but for your piece i think i get ya drift with the small and large bars, pretty fresh. but the proportion kinda ruins this simple piece, work on it and please post back
Yeah, I'll keep working with that one.
Another idea being thrown around.
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