Yeah, I wasn't feeling the bars that much either. I know the middle of the "W" is wonky and I think that my "I" should be thicker. Time to fix 'er up, thanks man.
Yeah, I wasn't feeling the bars that much either. I know the middle of the "W" is wonky and I think that my "I" should be thicker. Time to fix 'er up, thanks man.
Hahahahaha true that, this 1 the L kinda look like a z to me tho...Originally Posted by FlatScank
fry use only bars(rectangles) to make up this exact letter structure: FRY
And don't use multiple strokes for one line even if its sloppy, practice for a steady hand.
fill up pads of paper with that until your wrist dislocates
Humr- I like it for the most part, I'm not too sure about the left leg of the "M", though.
Messed up on the "B" and I think I put the "I" too far behind the "W".
What kind of marker are you using for your outline? looks real clean
Really? Aha, I'm just using a fine tip Sharpie. I actually wanted to get a different, thicker marker. It's the only marker I have left until I cop some more.
^yo the trick to line cleanliness is thickening. You can use a microtip or a fine tip or even a regular pen and then after you draw a line, you draw the same line next to it then fill in the space between the two lines, all it is is making the line thicker. It helps in overall appearance, makes your lines look straight if you got a shaky hand, and makes it so you can fix some outlining errors if you make any
yeahp, its pretty common sense. unless you can draw free hand foot long straight lines and perfect circles than line thickening is the way to do it. But if your gonna thicken ines you gotta make sure the thickness is consistent or else it will look bad
you never have tried using a micro tip to outline? It takes more time, but it will prolly help you... It don't mean stop tryin to freehand ish without thickening tho cause if you can get that down it will help when you have stezy pens to use
woah holy shit almost half a page with no pics... guess i have to cut into the bag of old gems... I dont think i posted this 1 before... but uh its one of those ones where i came back to it a couple days later after doin the first 2 letters...R dont really fit in it... and the H is all kinds of fucked, especially the bottom left O.o .....but uh crit if you please
Last edited by Phat 2; 04-05-2011 at 01:21 AM.
TIPS? im a toy
lopid2 - work on your letter structure, use bars to create the letters and stick with straight letters for now. Once you are good at that then you can start bending the bars.
crits to all... bars are your best friend :]
did this for a home girl recently says ELEENA, crits?
did this for a friend... the I sucks I know but I had only a pen lol and didnt wanna redo it.. I'm lazy crits?
The first one looks like it has no structure at all.
I'm not sure what the second one says and I'm not too fond of how the style was executed. Start simple.
both are with the same kind of brush-esqe style (what I call it haha) but def not my most used way of drawing graff... I'll post some more when I draw newwer ones, thanks for the crits
EDIT: the second one says NEIN which is No in german.. dunno if I had the [e] and [i] in the grammatically correct position tho... and yeah the [i] is effing horrible in that one
Last edited by crimateNC; 04-05-2011 at 02:25 PM.
@crimateNC .... like the handies .. lot bettr then mine haha ... but on the top one i would lose the arrows maby cap the bars better or try an work out some of the points .... just my opinion
Crits?
yo wat kind a 3d or background shall i do 2 this?????????
@Gatsoi
i like it ... fill an 3d to come i guess
new one... crits plz
Snapshot_20110405 by grinder13, on Flickr
Gatsoi- looks nice bro, add some 3d and a fill.
Did this one for Ian, was bored in my job training class just messin aroundd. lol
crits, please and thank you. (: i know its not the best.. the bars are different sizes.
sketch for a mates shed
little sister wanted me to include manga in a piece
the pride piece on a mates shed
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