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    Dank - Looks pretty sweet to me. Nothing bad that I can find.

    Any crits before I ink it?
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    Try and make all the letters the same size. The "S" and the "Y" seem too big in comparison to the rest. And next time try and not overlap the letters, its not a bad thing, but in this one it doesn't look like it has much purpose, looks forced.

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    any crits?

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    yea bro, KEYBOARD LETTERS!! kepp it simple, ik its exciting to do all that fancy shit and make ur peice real sick but have you ever seen a real amazing sketch that isnt clean....once you get the basics down then you can graduate to the big stuff keep working though any questions inbox me

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    Name:  Snapshot_20110424_5.jpg
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    key board letter for that would look like this...ATA
    its where the concept of bars come to play. letters are made up of them, so use them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ATAK!:3 View Post
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    can someone tell me why keyboard letters help with graffiti in the long run all the good artists didnt do them?

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    ^alot of the good writers did/still do them. i dont think its essential but its a good start to developing style. half the kids on this forum just like to scream "KEYBOARD LETTERS BRO!" just so they seem like they know what there doing but they dont. Do em or not its your choice just dont post fucking horrible shit on here cause noone wants to see it. That goes to you atak work on your shit and wait till you get better
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    Latest of the late, this shit has nice colors an i sense flaws but poke at my shit doggs

    ata, go keyboard for sure
    atak, same shit stay simple
    mewn, dope, blend that E to the W better and 3d it up and itll run
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    TRADE SLAPS HERE http://www.facebook.com/graffcityyo

    RIBCAGE MY BITCH

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    that shits dope but the W dont flow wit it

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    @rask top of your S is fucked up, dont really like the K... A is dope tho

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    hey rask im diggin the whole piece except the small e unless you always do that

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    Any crits? Just more shit i done at school.
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    @ hulk - give it 2 weeks of doin letter structure and see what happens...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tempo718 View Post
    @ hulk - give it 2 weeks of doin letter structure and see what happens...
    Alright thanks man. Always love gettin tips from more experienced writers and PM me. i have a ? about the Trains in chi-town

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    lol tempo prolly aint more experienced..........blind leading the blind.........

    @sick uuh bar width is good till the R, that little leg looks ugly, arrow on the M kinda dumb imo, and your styled hand writing is wack, super sloppy. you and mewn have the same W... looks similar to zewlers dub too. also you always do the same letters... try to branch out a bit breh
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