the drips look crooked cause im holding my notebook in the air :P
lol thanks for the crits homie
the drips look crooked cause im holding my notebook in the air :P
lol thanks for the crits homie
ehhhh. idk i find this one kinda boring. any ideas on what to do to "jazz it up" a bit?
swlost- id say redraw it and use bars it could turn out lookin alot better in my opinion
Tattoo for my homie...
Any Crits? Please & Thank You. (:
sorry this took so damn long soar. it sucks ill probably end up doing another one sometime
Swlost - I agree with jdub but make the part of the A a bit fatter and do something to the end of the V it just kinda dies
Chronic - It might just be the picture but the date and some of the other letters should be cleaned up IMO but other than that it looks pretty sweet
Kweezy - Make the 3D closer to the same length and angle. Maybe make the black part a little thinner. Nice piece tho, really clean
Here's some of mine
DUBZ
Yea I know I messed up the D that was just a quick one
BRING IT ON
ALESANA
MIND
^^ you need to work on letter structure and spacing
Like more space? And thanks
^^he means space your letters out more so they arent bunched up like that
thats an understatementOriginally Posted by pez 1794
Pez i wud suggest working with some keyboard letters cuz u cant go wrong their, but if not then i wud suggest making ur letters flow with each other more.
So is this one better or more?
first piece/burner I've ever sketched. All I did was throwups and tags before
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PEZ- No, keyboard letters like this..... JADA. Dont make them bubbly and use bars to make your letters.
JESTER- Look alright. The bottom line inside the "E" is too long and the "R" looks wierd.
Just an outline.....something new..
do not know if you would consider this toy but imma post it anyway.
pez- you need to go MUCH simpler and like everyone has said, work on structure and spacing,,,, that second flick is much better, still needs work.... oh and btw, ALESANA BLOWS!!!1!one! go listen to some real metal
jestr- im liking that, only thing i thing needs to be done is the middle bars in the E need to be thickened up
klove- cant tell if i like it, get some better quality flicks
EDIT:
thanks sick, that S is is bangin
Simple enough?
And I know I made that about a year ago, I don't even listen to them any more.
its a laptop camera, and just because someone likes the piece should not be the way it is judge it should not be judged on favortism more over it should be judged on style and flow and how it is spit onto the paper...just saying
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