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    Tasty the O looks weird to me when it's not colored but when it is it looks good so idk. Besides that it all looks pretty good.

    Still in pencil and trying to work on the 3D with this. I see that the N needs to be a bit longer and I missed the left side of the L.
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    nail- nice simple, the N has cut edges, make some other cut edges on the other letters, sidebar on L is missing a lil 3d and slap some color on it

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    @Rask work on bar width consistence
    @Tasty I dont really like the middle bar of the A i think if you only made one corner of the A over the rest it would look better, same with the R. Or maybe even only one side...
    @nail your letter spacing is bad... space between N A and I but not between I and L

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    ....hate that fat gap i left at the end of the page...just wanted to be done with this one tho

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    the colors came out flaiiiiiiiii
    but that shit on the right's beggin 2 b painted
    propz

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    More stuff need new markers it all i had
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    the colors came out flaiiiiiiiii
    but that shit on the right's beggin 2 b painted
    propz
    fasho breh

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    alright glums, now you're talkin!!! first flick is where it's at my man, make both the U's limbs the same height, and lose the 3 dots on both sides of the word, and just keep practicing on the letters' flow until you get it perfect
    now is the time to absolutely abuse this kind of sketches... do it like a million times

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    glums i still think you need to work with bars more, your letter widths are mad inconsistent

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    Quote Originally Posted by ian View Post
    glums i still think you need to work with bars more, your letter widths are mad inconsistent
    NAIL-like the others have stated just bring the letters closer and you have a nice straight letter piece to work from

    Rib/reach- feeling the colours reminds me of summer.. What markers do you use??

    Alright Ian I will post up some straight letter pieces using bars. This other style piece looks off I know but it's in the works it's just the style I'm trying to get down.

    And phat I will do! I can tell what letters look odd now taking another look not happy with the G L and U..anyway back to sketching.

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    sharpies, microns, and prismas... but if your in the market for markers though i strongly, and i mean strongly, recomend the new trias. they got 3 tips, and got the best colors/ broad variety of colors. Im tryna get my hands on some

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    GLUMS- looks pretty decent, would look great touched up on a freight

    Skin exchange- any crits?

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    Reach- that 2nd page is fucking dope
    glumps- keep workin that looks good
    skin- that shit got lost at I an N the flow just stoped

    I tryed this and it failed posting what i got done on it gunna make a new one later
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    bored in class, didnt have room for an E. i like the SE on the throw as well, but the rest blows





    Rask im actually likin that aside from the middle bar of the A

    CK i like the S and the I , not feelin the k or n or the line goin under the bottom

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    did this for the piece battle. shits baddd and super plain

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    ^watchu talkin bout breh? that shits clean, and shits on all the other stuff i've seen you do. Bar widths good, lines are clean, and your 3d is on point. good work *****h

    what you aint like about it? i think the letters could use some color, or keep the letters white and put in a bg color... unless u aint want to waste your colors... if its in your book id make it a production.... but thats me.
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    Well pointman. I like it but the u, you seem to have developed an unusual style towards the bottom of the u, see if you can develop a better u to fit that throwie, I'm sure that u will work with some other throwie though

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    rasm that shit is tight
    Skin clean it up an it'll look all right... The connections all make sense
    Noise this guy bombs hard... http://www.flickr.com/photos/theyrel...ng/5304408186/
    Names are so hard to find now... 30 years of modern graff an all the good names have been used by atlas one writer before hand...

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    Quote Originally Posted by extinct View Post
    rasm that shit is tight
    Skin clean it up an it'll look all right... The connections all make sense
    Noise this guy bombs hard... http://www.flickr.com/photos/theyrel...ng/5304408186/
    Names are so hard to find now... 30 years of modern graff an all the good names have been used by atlas one writer before hand...

    meh, im not too worried about someone puttin up mad throwies in canada, ive only painted once so far anyway, and ill probably end up changing my name at some point anyway

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    @dankbudz- That shit is clean man. Feeling it.
    @noise- Gotta say, I'm feeling that "S" at the top.
    Just messing around.



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    wow cool ^


 

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