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    he's not going to listen rib, that will be on a wall this weekend

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    Flat- A and T look kinda cocked sideways but dope otherwise
    glumps- pretty dope shit, some colors be dope too
    Reach- agree with the other guy, yo shits real stiff stretch it out a bit and give that shit room to breath

    Just a little shit i tried, dont really like it and threw a couple hands
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    yall sayin he aint listenin but i think hes slowly starting too, that last one had the same base as all his other ones, but he cut the wacker extensions and arrows

    anyways im boutta color my shit up and get the finished pages on here

    as for fluidity ill try to give my letters some roundness on the next one. fasho tho
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    werm- im liking the E and the R in the 2nd piece... everything else, not your best imo... but keep workin at it
    glums- nice and simple, thats good... but im not feeling the face in the G at all, i say just make the G a regular G
    flat- (even tho you probably wont listen) keep simpling that up and work on your bar width and itll be like 1000X better.
    rask- not my favourite from you, but your 3D is on point, and as usual your handies are bangin

    new stuff.. and by request a coloured version of a piece from my last post...
    p.s whuch one of the blank ones should i colour (they're on the same peice of loose leaf)
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    your makin alotta progress with taht piece, but i never really felt that stretched look and the bar under the A is wack, but honestly youve made it look alot better keep that shit goin

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    Tasty the O looks weird to me when it's not colored but when it is it looks good so idk. Besides that it all looks pretty good.

    Still in pencil and trying to work on the 3D with this. I see that the N needs to be a bit longer and I missed the left side of the L.
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    nail- nice simple, the N has cut edges, make some other cut edges on the other letters, sidebar on L is missing a lil 3d and slap some color on it

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    @Rask work on bar width consistence
    @Tasty I dont really like the middle bar of the A i think if you only made one corner of the A over the rest it would look better, same with the R. Or maybe even only one side...
    @nail your letter spacing is bad... space between N A and I but not between I and L

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    ....hate that fat gap i left at the end of the page...just wanted to be done with this one tho

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    the colors came out flaiiiiiiiii
    but that shit on the right's beggin 2 b painted
    propz

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    More stuff need new markers it all i had
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    the colors came out flaiiiiiiiii
    but that shit on the right's beggin 2 b painted
    propz
    fasho breh

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    alright glums, now you're talkin!!! first flick is where it's at my man, make both the U's limbs the same height, and lose the 3 dots on both sides of the word, and just keep practicing on the letters' flow until you get it perfect
    now is the time to absolutely abuse this kind of sketches... do it like a million times

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    glums i still think you need to work with bars more, your letter widths are mad inconsistent

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    Quote Originally Posted by ian View Post
    glums i still think you need to work with bars more, your letter widths are mad inconsistent
    NAIL-like the others have stated just bring the letters closer and you have a nice straight letter piece to work from

    Rib/reach- feeling the colours reminds me of summer.. What markers do you use??

    Alright Ian I will post up some straight letter pieces using bars. This other style piece looks off I know but it's in the works it's just the style I'm trying to get down.

    And phat I will do! I can tell what letters look odd now taking another look not happy with the G L and U..anyway back to sketching.

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    sharpies, microns, and prismas... but if your in the market for markers though i strongly, and i mean strongly, recomend the new trias. they got 3 tips, and got the best colors/ broad variety of colors. Im tryna get my hands on some

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    GLUMS- looks pretty decent, would look great touched up on a freight

    Skin exchange- any crits?

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    Reach- that 2nd page is fucking dope
    glumps- keep workin that looks good
    skin- that shit got lost at I an N the flow just stoped

    I tryed this and it failed posting what i got done on it gunna make a new one later
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    bored in class, didnt have room for an E. i like the SE on the throw as well, but the rest blows





    Rask im actually likin that aside from the middle bar of the A

    CK i like the S and the I , not feelin the k or n or the line goin under the bottom

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    did this for the piece battle. shits baddd and super plain

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    ^watchu talkin bout breh? that shits clean, and shits on all the other stuff i've seen you do. Bar widths good, lines are clean, and your 3d is on point. good work *****h

    what you aint like about it? i think the letters could use some color, or keep the letters white and put in a bg color... unless u aint want to waste your colors... if its in your book id make it a production.... but thats me.
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