Some work i did during school. Crits please.
what does it say? u need to work on keyboard letters bro go simple
zers, everything's fine but the R. you need to practice it smore
booyeah, shits gettin cleaner ever since i got these prismas
Ian - It looks pretty good, maybe separate the O and I a little bit more to make it flow better and the bottom of the E just looks off to me
Last edited by pez 1794; 04-21-2011 at 11:58 PM.
Yes I know I'm a toy and everyone else is better then me. Quit pointing it out.
Ian that looks sick
didn't know silver was so hard to use, i won't be making that mistake again
critty critty bang bang
i know my bars are off in spots, im still tryin to get the hang of this line thickening business, and the picture doesnt do it proper justice, looks better in real life, but im happy with the way it turned out
GETH work on keepin those bars consistent, also try to straighten out your letters more, theyre all goin off at weird angles, just doesnt look good IMO
^if your going to do a dark outline do make your second outline/forcefield or whatever it is you call it, a lighter color
word, its lighter in person so you can see it better but i gotchu
yup yup, and usually when i decide to put hash marks/lines/blocks of color in my 3d i make it a diiferent shade of the 3d color and I hardly ever use outline color for it unless its black and white... that 1 is more personal preference though
yeah dawg thats the first time i ever tried usin those
ian- 1st pic-drop some of the extensions, and dont bother connecting the letters (yet), other than that ts looking pre clean.
2nd pic-too many extension and bends in the letters... and imo it wouldve looked better with the I being seperate from the connection between the M and N... and the D is pre wack, sorry man
geth- your letters are leaning too far over, and shorten the top extension on the E and make the bottom extension on the G go farther.
dent- make your letter size more equal... your D and T need work, and your drop shadow is pre off.. but, your E and N are lookin pre good
new stuff, crits always appreciated
any crits on dis?...
ian - I notice an improvement in all your stuff, any painting recently?
tasty - why do we never see alot of color from you? otherwise bars have good consistent width.
dent - that is a good look, but is there any reason the n and t are smaller than the first 2 letters?
ewl - i'd say ur gettin a little better bit by bit but on this peice your t got too close to the h.
thanks... and ya i dont use colour because i wanted to get structure down... ill do a quick fill on some of those actually and re-post later
EDIT: im digging that tempo, my only complaint is the A doesnt look like an A and your L should be bigger... but keep it up
tasty i like ur shit for the soar i would put more spacing between the s and o as for the throws my fave is the far right
tempo yeah fix up the l and a good work dude
the I is kind of hurting the flow, the PE flows really well together though, im feeling it.
yeah im seeing that now thanks bro
any constructive thoughts people? ...
@Mippi - I see why weed said the I throw it off cause it not as wide as the rest but reguardless that dont stand out bad enough to ruin what you got goin on. I think its dope.