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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    took Ribs advice and added a background
    any tips on the damn S? its either that or the D thats making it not work.
    yo if you want to take it even further, take a dark color like blue or black and fill in all the white it would pop off the page more... pretty big paper tho so id only use a sharpie or a pen thats not expensive but lays on a non streaky color

    Your S aint that bad, but the D just looks weird... and thats really all there is to it, bar width s fine and connections are fine

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    The only dark blue i have is too dark and makes it too hard to see the black lines, maybe dark green or something. I was originally debating coloring it in but I feel like I dont have the right color to fill it. Probably gunna say fuck it and color it anyway.

    The page isn't big at all, its one of those mini books haha, shits decieving. They are nice to use but any big words in it suck cause there isn't much space.

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    i guess the square pages threw me off. I got a square sketch book thats almost twice the size of the regualr 11x8 standard blackbook sized paper, really nice paper but kinda eats up some markers almost like canvas so i dont use it very often.

    yea a darkish green might work or maybe even a color that compliments the pink like a lime green, next time dont outline your background with black unless your going to fill in the rest with black... might just be a preference thing, not exactly a rule, you could even thicken the black outline around the pink so its a real bold outline, and then add any color other than pink or something that makes the black hard to see.

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    Jest- shits dope, but just squish the S n T a lil more

    this shit just came sloppy but fuck it gimme the lows
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    little character reminds me of boogey in nightmare before christmas a little bit... and yeah thats kinda slops, dont really like the grittyness. the R to the A is good. I dont like the squiggles on the letters tho like the S and K, and i thought you K was an R for a sec... i think if you solid that up it would look aight

    took a closer pic so yall could see it a tiny bigger
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    Rask - Yea I agree with ribcage. If you smoothed the edges a little and made them more defined it would look much better I think

    Ribcage - That piece looks sweet, the colors came out great. I think someone already said it but the middle of your E looks kinda off.

    Mine again.
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    The Z looks ugly but idk how to fix it while still making it flow

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    Top of the L should be a bit bigger and in toward the I a little.

    Other than that, crits?

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    that nail looks pretty cool, L top bar is alittle off but its dope keep workin it

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    Nail thats looking good man, maybe some 3d on the back of the L
    Rask i think a slimey sort of fill would suit better than flames just preference but its a good idea

    just toying around still have so many fill ideas
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    ^ yo i dont like middle bar of M, its too dinky, looks like an angry inch

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    pen freestlye for my gf...


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    could i get some crits


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    you need to take a week drive to california......... i hope that didnt take you 3 hours... work on structure. bar placement and bar width consistency

    .......whoever was originally above me deleted their post, this want directed towards humr
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    something different. Crits?

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    Crits?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ATAK!:3 View Post
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    3 hour car ride to florida, any crits?
    google ATAK BF NSF DKLT...

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    centrysam's is lookin real good , the bottom one my fav , and reach is lookin nice , but that zonk piece on the last page got em both
    Last edited by W_G_O_N_E; 04-30-2011 at 08:24 AM.

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    thanks man doin lots of sketching latly

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    Alright so ive been throwin up some quickies and tagging but im looking on working up to putting up a real sick piece crits on this please and possible colors? crits on the tag too
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    go simple.

    i lol just posting that if any of you older dudes understand.

    use bars. PURE <--- like that

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    @Upper first of all loose the extensions then fatter the bar's.
    Also work on your tag !! the underlining of the E sucks.
    Peace


 

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