^T kinda looks like a C i think if you make that right bottom connection under the middle bar of T it will look more like a T
^T kinda looks like a C i think if you make that right bottom connection under the middle bar of T it will look more like a T
^haha, that post gave me a nice laugh (Flat's Post)
werm i agree with you that the E doesnt really fit the style, play around with different E's for a bit
ribcage not feelin the bottom right leg of the R and how it connects to the E, and like someone else said the top half of the R seems a little small, other than that I like it
glums you gotta work with bars my dude, the freestyling of your letters doesnt look good
Last edited by ian; 04-26-2011 at 05:34 PM.
no they're not. you proved it over and over againOriginally Posted by FlatScank
what you meant to say is "comments will be ignored"
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*glums, your second flick shows progression, keep that simple stuff up man. dont stop. make your L's lower bar longer too.
*sexy, actually the second type of 3D is better, harder and much more interesting than making all the lines go parallel to each other. just cut them halfway to the VANISHING point (not "vantage") you know what i mean? the lines dont HAVE to meet, cutting them halfway is nice. try it out.
*Sed, your coloring skills look fine, but not the letters. destroy all those angles and replace them with curves. you seem like you're just starting with graff. for now, take my advice and only do angles (corners) where they originally are in the original letter. for example, an S originally has no angles, only curves. yours has FOUR angles.
same goes for sexy too.
*Reach, like I've alraedy commented on your works before, your stuff is nice, but needs more fluidity. more motion. flatskank and sick beat me to it though and told you that. I'm only saying it again a 3rd time to place more importance on this crit. you shuold take it into consideration my man. coz i know for a fact that you got potential.
*werm, the top sketch is good. use that one bro.
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he's not going to listen rib, that will be on a wall this weekend
Flat- A and T look kinda cocked sideways but dope otherwise
glumps- pretty dope shit, some colors be dope too
Reach- agree with the other guy, yo shits real stiff stretch it out a bit and give that shit room to breath
Just a little shit i tried, dont really like it and threw a couple hands
yall sayin he aint listenin but i think hes slowly starting too, that last one had the same base as all his other ones, but he cut the wacker extensions and arrows
anyways im boutta color my shit up and get the finished pages on here
as for fluidity ill try to give my letters some roundness on the next one. fasho tho
Last edited by ribcage; 04-26-2011 at 07:29 PM.
werm- im liking the E and the R in the 2nd piece... everything else, not your best imo... but keep workin at it
glums- nice and simple, thats good... but im not feeling the face in the G at all, i say just make the G a regular G
flat- (even tho you probably wont listen) keep simpling that up and work on your bar width and itll be like 1000X better.
rask- not my favourite from you, but your 3D is on point, and as usual your handies are bangin
new stuff.. and by request a coloured version of a piece from my last post...
p.s whuch one of the blank ones should i colour (they're on the same peice of loose leaf)
your makin alotta progress with taht piece, but i never really felt that stretched look and the bar under the A is wack, but honestly youve made it look alot better keep that shit goin
Tasty the O looks weird to me when it's not colored but when it is it looks good so idk. Besides that it all looks pretty good.
Still in pencil and trying to work on the 3D with this. I see that the N needs to be a bit longer and I missed the left side of the L.
As always crits are appreciated.
nail- nice simple, the N has cut edges, make some other cut edges on the other letters, sidebar on L is missing a lil 3d and slap some color on it
@Rask work on bar width consistence
@Tasty I dont really like the middle bar of the A i think if you only made one corner of the A over the rest it would look better, same with the R. Or maybe even only one side...
@nail your letter spacing is bad... space between N A and I but not between I and L
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....hate that fat gap i left at the end of the page...just wanted to be done with this one tho
the colors came out flaiiiiiiiii
but that shit on the right's beggin 2 b painted
propz
More stuff need new markers it all i had
fasho breh
alright glums, now you're talkin!!! first flick is where it's at my man, make both the U's limbs the same height, and lose the 3 dots on both sides of the word, and just keep practicing on the letters' flow until you get it perfect
now is the time to absolutely abuse this kind of sketches... do it like a million times
glums i still think you need to work with bars more, your letter widths are mad inconsistent
NAIL-like the others have stated just bring the letters closer and you have a nice straight letter piece to work from
Rib/reach- feeling the colours reminds me of summer.. What markers do you use??
Alright Ian I will post up some straight letter pieces using bars. This other style piece looks off I know but it's in the works it's just the style I'm trying to get down.
And phat I will do! I can tell what letters look odd now taking another look not happy with the G L and U..anyway back to sketching.
sharpies, microns, and prismas... but if your in the market for markers though i strongly, and i mean strongly, recomend the new trias. they got 3 tips, and got the best colors/ broad variety of colors. Im tryna get my hands on some
GLUMS- looks pretty decent, would look great touched up on a freight
Skin exchange- any crits?
Reach- that 2nd page is fucking dope
glumps- keep workin that looks good
skin- that shit got lost at I an N the flow just stoped
I tryed this and it failed posting what i got done on it gunna make a new one later
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