Alright so ive been throwin up some quickies and tagging but im looking on working up to putting up a real sick piece crits on this please and possible colors? crits on the tag too
Alright so ive been throwin up some quickies and tagging but im looking on working up to putting up a real sick piece crits on this please and possible colors? crits on the tag too
go simple.
i lol just posting that if any of you older dudes understand.
use bars. PURE <--- like that
@Upper first of all loose the extensions then fatter the bar's.
Also work on your tag !! the underlining of the E sucks.
Peace
^Take your own advice and work on your tags. S is weird, and your T looks like a Y
What's up guys, this looks like a fine place to stash my first post.
Gotta love shitty webcam pictures.
The o should be a little bit bigger and my drop shadow def needs improvement
Crits?
yo humr your structure is perfectly fine... you just have some overdone connections... which work but you should make the connections more natural lookin... ribcage... his structure is good...
Tobe, if that an E at the end i would work on that.
looks clean though
decided to color in an outline and fuck around with blending
hmmm what markers you got? The dark to light green blend doesnt look all that great visually but is blended alright on the S, way to heavy on the D and not enough on the E. the bottom of the D is real dark. But the blend from lighter green to blue/grey looks pretty good.
........letters aint all that good, but bars are good
I wish i could do that dank, your bars are pretty much on point.
@ribcage post some of Ur piece's i wane see em
dank - Youve got good use of bars. But the shadow on the bottom right part of the S shouldnt be so thin, fatten it out a bit like the rest and itll look spot on. Only other thing I can really point out is that the E doesnt fit the style of the other letters, but it does look nice. Youve just got to get the other two letters into something similar to that and itll look good man.
Havent posted anything up here in a while. A bit rusty from having a break but it reads 'DENIE' its not complete yet, havent colored it in properly. crits would be appreciated.
Thanks for all those crits, Its not great but im glad with how the blending turned out, and I used prismas.
The S sucks, I have been having trouble with it but i am slowly progressing.
Im liking the E so i have been trying to work the other letters to it.
I'm aware the Top S doesnt fit what so ever.
Skope3, I dont see much to crit on, it looks clean and letters look nice, but those E's look pretty big, and the I looks small.
dont get too hype off this, just mesin around ..
what up with the negative?
and those letters dont look too hot, same with those extensions.
everything looks dope. this is the first drawing i've done in a long ass timehuh.. turns out bars work. i colored it but the pics won't upload so whatever
Last edited by balance42020; 05-02-2011 at 08:07 PM.
^bars work when you use them right, your widths are waaay off in a ton of places. also capital A then lowercase a doesnt make sense IMO. lost those extensions for now and just get down with the letters homie
It's real dirty still, but uh this what im workin on... idk how the fuck popeyes boutta come into play with it, but fuck it hes already there
kinda hard to crit a pencil sketch but if you got an opinion on it be quick cause im most likely going to outline it tonight
haha That popeyes dope
and i think there is a bit too much empty space in that R
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