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    haha well clearly im not going for realism. but drawing buddha was fun, ive done some goofy doodles of him in the past.
    yeah it took a litlle bit making his fat body look right with his head.

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    @ rib - looks like your did a nice job and took your time on every detail, I understand why that's so important. I didn't notice any defects until perm pointed that one thing out, besides the missing outline around pop eyes right hand, either way it looks good.

    @ dank - whoa haha buddah is exposed its official. na jp, cool concept i think thickening up the writing on top would help imo the J looks lit , nice letters down there those two D's look almost identical.

    @ samurai - I especially like your random sketches i think your next ones try an improve on the coloring that would step them up a lot.

    @aomin - your piece would improve a lot with more identical design on both sides of your letters.

    @shroomsh - from what i can tell your style would look dope with more in depth detail and diverse colors. lets see it.

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    aaaaye you noticied that eh? lol yeap another coloring mistake, colored that part in before i decided to outline popeye in yellow

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    i dont know what crits have been given (tl;dr)... so heres mine;

    everyone BUT ribcage, shroomsh and dankbudz need to go simpler.. easy as that

    new shit ive been working on... crits plz?

    p.s- ignore teh blue stuff inside the letters on the white and blue piece, the idea was MUCH better in my head lol
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    Tasty, I'm not too sure about the way your bars connect on the blue and white piece, and I also think that there is too much negative space, try making some bars thicker than others to cut out unnecessary negative space in your piece. This said I am glad you understand bars, they are a big part in developing a unique style.

    Ribcage, what can I say, that popeye character is dope.

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    @ribcage what do you mean?

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    uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh I mean connect your bars smoother, and keep the width/ wideness of your bars an equal length so bars look proportionate nahmean?

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    part one of a project im working on.. gonna fill an a3 page with piece outlines then hopefully colour them.. this project was inspired by the fact that i only have one A3 page of bleed proof paper left
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    likein that shit shroomsh ...

    few flicks ..


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    Snapshot_20110508 by grinder13, on Flickr

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    that first throwie on the top left humr is dope... especially the R

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    Hi i'm Afro been writing for 5 months hers some of my sketches and drawing... http://www.flickr.com/photos/61764804@N07/

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    looks good. your headin in the right place!

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    A couple of really old ones from a 2008. I know theres some real whack toy-like extensions on some of them, but i'm just looking for crits on the style of lettering more than anything. Also, it reads 'MONK'
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    Skope- being a uk head myself too I think the styles are pretty wicked.Loving the second sketch and the third would be nice if you did it again with less extensions like you were saying. Got any pics of painted pieces??

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    Thanks dude. Nah I dont have any pics of painted pieces on this computer sorry.. Whereabouts in southwest are you from?

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    ...seems weird that the date says 2011 then /08, nobody cares when its from anyways. It could be 5 years ago it could be today, its still not very good. Like you said there is a ton of wack extensions, so how can we crit on structure if its all based off of wack extensions. The thing that bothers me the most on those 1's is bar width -cheers

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    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    ...seems weird that the date says 2011 then /08,
    In england we write the date differently. 20/11/08 means 20th november 2008.

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    Skope and shroomish im digging what you've been posting

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    ooooooooooo lol my B then, i was just punking you anyways....

    posting this just because i like the way i started it, so ima honor this freestyle by making it a full color page. And like all my other ones i post the outline after i decide ima ink it all so here it is.

    did a rough sketch of something similar a while back for the round robin but I never finished it and then destroyed it. Im gonna fill this in w/ green and shit so everything will look more proportionate, like size of A, Middle sections of B, and middle bar of S.... It aint really in a position to be critted, but if yall want to, be my guest

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    @tasty- your work is so much better with added color, I understand its time consuming though. when you color again do something more with that 3d.
    @shroomsh- looking forward to see the outcome of that
    @cent- dope fills
    @skope- never saw that style before. not bad
    @rib- I like the way that got started as well.
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    nothin special, this was a presumed exchange with bloodywarfare.


 

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