What's up guys, this looks like a fine place to stash my first post.
Gotta love shitty webcam pictures.
The o should be a little bit bigger and my drop shadow def needs improvement
yo humr your structure is perfectly fine... you just have some overdone connections... which work but you should make the connections more natural lookin... ribcage... his structure is good...
Tobe, if that an E at the end i would work on that.
looks clean though
decided to color in an outline and fuck around with blending
hmmm what markers you got? The dark to light green blend doesnt look all that great visually but is blended alright on the S, way to heavy on the D and not enough on the E. the bottom of the D is real dark. But the blend from lighter green to blue/grey looks pretty good.
........letters aint all that good, but bars are good
I wish i could do that dank, your bars are pretty much on point.
@ribcage post some of Ur piece's i wane see em
dank - Youve got good use of bars. But the shadow on the bottom right part of the S shouldnt be so thin, fatten it out a bit like the rest and itll look spot on. Only other thing I can really point out is that the E doesnt fit the style of the other letters, but it does look nice. Youve just got to get the other two letters into something similar to that and itll look good man.
Havent posted anything up here in a while. A bit rusty from having a break but it reads 'DENIE' its not complete yet, havent colored it in properly. crits would be appreciated.
Thanks for all those crits, Its not great but im glad with how the blending turned out, and I used prismas.
The S sucks, I have been having trouble with it but i am slowly progressing.
Im liking the E so i have been trying to work the other letters to it.
I'm aware the Top S doesnt fit what so ever.
Skope3, I dont see much to crit on, it looks clean and letters look nice, but those E's look pretty big, and the I looks small.
dont get too hype off this, just mesin around ..
what up with the negative?
and those letters dont look too hot, same with those extensions.
everything looks dope. this is the first drawing i've done in a long ass time huh.. turns out bars work. i colored it but the pics won't upload so whatever
Last edited by balance42020; 05-02-2011 at 09:07 PM.
^bars work when you use them right, your widths are waaay off in a ton of places. also capital A then lowercase a doesnt make sense IMO. lost those extensions for now and just get down with the letters homie
It's real dirty still, but uh this what im workin on... idk how the fuck popeyes boutta come into play with it, but fuck it hes already there
kinda hard to crit a pencil sketch but if you got an opinion on it be quick cause im most likely going to outline it tonight
haha That popeyes dope
and i think there is a bit too much empty space in that R
^ between the legs? I want there to be a little space for a background after i put 3d on it ya feel me? cause im most likely gonna outline it in black and put black 3d since its only a 2 letter... was gonna try and incorporate a spinach theme but i decided against it... maybe in the fill
Yeah, that middle part of the R of the right leg just looks too thin and that H is pretty fat all around.
I get what your sayin on that 3d, but would there be room to show teh background in the H?
If you pull off that spinach theme that would be so dope, seems tricky, but you gotta learn somehow.
Yeamp, the 3d would fit in with the bottom part of the H's right bar and a little bit there at the top cause ima do it straight out to the left ya dig?. Im tryin to make the middle bar of the R thinner to extenuate the movement/flow of the R... people tellin me ive been on the stiff side lately so im tryin somethin a little different. I gotta make that inside curve a little sharper though cause right now that right leg is lookin pretty wack
And idk really how id do a spinach fill now that i think about it, spinach isnt really all that drawable.Ii could do a can as the background and make the letters a leafy green color... but i kinda wanted to do green in the background... idk yet, something i'll have time to think out
Yeah i feel you. and take time on coloring, i tend to fuck stuff up by not thinking it through haha.
I posted some earlier, havent drawn today, ill post up tomorrow mornin.