@ dankbudz dope, almost think you maybe should have connected all your lines instead of leaving the overlapping parts open, but only because how it might look when color it if you color it.... and your D aint really all that fucked up
@ dankbudz dope, almost think you maybe should have connected all your lines instead of leaving the overlapping parts open, but only because how it might look when color it if you color it.... and your D aint really all that fucked up
Last edited by Phat 2; 05-18-2011 at 06:27 AM.
eh, we will see how it turns out.
I still dont know how i wanna color it, definitely some shades of green... fuckin love that color.
dude go simpler^^
now that i think about it more if the open parts have the same colors then it will look like it does now, im trippin. unless you did every letter a different color or something....dont do that
your lines are super crooked breh, and the extensions on your S's are wiggidy wack. ya hands is bad too....
@sir to you
just practice letters alot. practice. and practice some more.
think of it this way, you learn to walk before you ride a bike, right
so why try something you dont know, before you truly understand letterforms?
haha what are you talking about, ribcage? i think you are trippin..
im probably just going to close them letters up. itll help with coloring this bitch too.
dope shit dave love the old school feel
and menace watcha talkin bout iv had 1ok desipher and this one
lol your that kid from you tubeOriginally Posted by smack1one
some other sketches crit will be appriciated
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no i mean like ooollld that was the first name i started writing just dont like commenting with out leavin somthin so i left a shitty throwback
dont close em!!!! Lol yeah i was rambling thinking about how id color it... prolly like first letter solid blue next letter pink and then alternate, but if you did that with parts of your lines open the blue and pink would create a different unwanted color where they touch if the black dont seperate them ya digg? but if you do any combination of color horizontally that wouldnt be a problem because the open parts would have the same color ya feel me?
Hurr durr, terrible tag is terrible. Can't really think of one at the moment.
Can't get better quality atm, will try and post better next time I get around to doing so.
GOOD but fix the / on the R and your handstyle is oldschool ahahah could be better though
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Last edited by Phat 2; 05-18-2011 at 07:35 PM.
you need to work on simples first cause your letter structure isnt that great
your extencions dont make sence one the 2nd one
I hate the M, and it looks like MUSC to me haha. damn.
can i get crits? help on the M would be dope, i think its the fact that its curved right that it looks weird.
also lame piece i colored
lol what happened to that seder peice? anyways m troubles eh? It looks to me like the middle bars coming down to make the point in the middle like this \ / are too close togethor, making it look a little awkward... space them out a little bit so theres some space between the \/ bars and the straight bars for starts, and then see what it turns into from their. THe bar widths on the straight bars of the M are off too.
@dave the N and A are dope, the R and K......not so much. you got purty hands for a pirate
why would you write nark thats like makin pancakes with corn filled shit. i dont get it
i still got have the seder piece, i colored it straight lightish green. i wanna add more but im lazy and brain dead
haha nice analogy, sir2you
ahahah those arnt my hands their my girls lol
and fuck i dunno i like the letters
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