i cant really crit that much
top ones lookin good though
im enterin this in the piece battle, i have yet to add the background, but im tryin to get crits on the letters and such
another little one, sorry to break up the drama
Isho, any pointers etc? First piece lol
Last edited by Isho; 05-29-2011 at 07:26 PM.
USE= lovin the s.. curious to see what you paint like...
(sighs... rubs eye brows with index finger and thumb...) ok....
1- make your letter letters..
2-dont go crazy with colorful fills at 1st...makes your stuff look trashy..
3- im not a big fan of tellin ppl to ue bars but try them... but do it in your own way...make your own READABLE STYLE
4-lose the characters in and out side of your letters..
5- wtf do you write?lol cant read any of them....
Last edited by Phat 2; 05-27-2011 at 07:43 PM.
going simple but where to go from there? do i just work on connections or do i need to get letter style down before i do connections?
task you live somewhere where you gotta be 18 to buy or 21 in some areas i think? in that case get someone to buy for you, show them some of your sketches so they know your the real deal, and plus i only ever go out late at night, unless its a legal gig, or a very secluded area, im 16 btw
anyway here is one that i am planning to paint
yo i like, but i think the top halfs of the Z and S could use a little negative space, nahmeen?
stuff from the past 2 days... crits?
@ribcage, you mean remove tha scribble things or??
Tasty that is awesome.
on the peice
try bars and simpler things homesss
havent posted in a bit, internets been down, ill have some more up in a couple days
I know your gonna say that i shouldn't be doing a legends name and shit like that. But i was looking at some of his work, and it inspired me to do this. just a quick sketch. crits?
Oh and, ignore the extra lines and squiggles. I took a scrap piece of paper to draw this.
task977 just get a bum to buy it for you and then give him the change. or if you look 18 you could just try to buy it yourself, but since your 13 that probably wont work so just go with the bum
shroomsh - thats dope, your stuff always looks so sick
OverOne - as long as you don't write it on a wall its fine, its good practice for you to do other letters, i did the same thing when i first started and with the same word too haha