Which letter do you think is the F? It says GRADS. I don't have any markers, white out, or anything, so I just had to go with what I got haha.
Which letter do you think is the F? It says GRADS. I don't have any markers, white out, or anything, so I just had to go with what I got haha.
I thought that A was an H. Keep it connected up top.
@Fury i use pencil 2, the only thing i got to say is take time to clean out the sketch, don´t rush the coloring, it takes more time but in the end makes all the diference
P.S. my blackbook covers, a project for my girl, and a sketch with a F**** up brian griffin
Yea fury, get rid of the cuts in the letters, theyre making it hard to tell what letters youve actually used. The cuts and stuff at the top and bottom of your D make it look more like a B.
Jisk - your shit is fucking nuts! I'd start posting in the intermediate thread instead (unless you are already) you've got some serious skill bro.
Did this a minuite ago, havent done any pieces for a few weeks.. Reads DEBTR, the R sucks homer simpsons fat yellow cock, fuck. not finished yet. crits please
The other one reads SKOPE, i posted it up here ages ago but it didnt get any comments. Just wondering if its a style I should go back to, removing alot of the extensions ofcourse.
@Skope2 the first one i say the char is perfect, don't touch it, the letters just need to be spiced up a lil bit, but it's turning out cool, the second one im not sure it wil turn out great but when you'r finished with it show us....oh and thks for the crits :P
oh and here is something simple for you guys to crit.
Fur- oops, I miss typed, i meant the G haha.
@dave the pirate - you should make that E the same size as the rest of the letters,it's a dope letter but it doesn't go well with the other letters
@ewl - lose the effect and try to make your bars even
a simple sketch with some mistakes,crits please
Sick fill but if youre going to make the E and D connect like that then you need to move the Z and R closer to them. Or move the E and D away from each other a bit. Keep it up though man, your letter structure is decent.
i filled this in with a bingo dabber if i remember
T-side ideas
t side?
Those two are dope but it seems like you're making pieces off of the same idea for a bomb. Like using the same lettering for everything. Switch it up, find a new style. Don't get me wrong though, that'd be a dope bomb if you could do it quickly or a sweet piece for one.Originally Posted by pointman
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Its aesthetically pleasing, but you can't really see any letters after the W or M or whatever that is at the beginning. Thats probably what you were going for, but still. You cant read anything.
I'd say incorporate that type of thing into a simpler piece.
perfect. It's actully not supposed to say Mipe. Its for a school project where im supposed to use the elements of design and influence from abtract expressionist artists to represent a song. figured i'd put my love of graff to use. thanks.
In that case its very good and you should be proud of yourself!
dropshade? some ideas for colors ??
i wouldnt do a drop shadow, id do a long straight shadow/3d to the right, and when i say long i mean at the very least 3/4 of an inch cause the open space you left to the right of it. as for colors that shits all up to you cause no one knows what colors u has.
Last edited by ribcage; 06-09-2011 at 10:39 PM.
ok here is my first serious attemp in graffiti world) its made without copying or anything like that. and is the first complete drawing ever. i sketched some letters before but thats it. i would like to know what you dont like about it. what should i watch out in my next attempts, what should i work on stuff like that. thank you very much
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