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    whats up flat, i see your crew spark a lil light of fire in that belly, do your thing! stay wit it.
    ummmmm i ono im 2 lazy to go back n comment on all y'all but yesterday was tupac birthday so I put together a piece in memory of his life. here it go. hope you like it.
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    Tempo- go alott simpler for now
    Erk- cant really crit that, but i would work on the E

    got bored so i fucked around with these things you call markers...

    those thin sharpie markers suck dick at keeping a consistent line.

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    Quickie for a friend.

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    I like it. the YC is knda boring but those are tough as it is lol.

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    dank that is sooo good.
    I have a hard time with curves n all that. yakno

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Tempo- go alott simpler for now
    Erk- cant really crit that, but i would work on the E

    got bored so i fucked around with these things you call markers...

    those thin sharpie markers suck dick at keeping a consistent line.
    fine liner sharpies/Micro tips? you just have to get used to em, you gotta apply the perfect amount of pressure and have a smooth hand. If you push down too hard it fucks em up

    @nouv clean as always, C got a lil chubby at the bottom

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    imo it didnt get chubby enough to match the L and E

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    spmething i scetched for my crew, crits?

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    Ditch those arrows.

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    @atakI really like how you wrote crew and then put an arrow pointing to the letters... lol but uh lose the arrows and extensions for now, and work on straight letters and your handstyles

    meh pencil sketches for days, this the next 1 to be worked/fixed and inked, emphasis on the fixing part

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    thas wassup rib, look a lil different from ur others?

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    yeah i guess, looks like my simps mostly, xcept the A and R, I gotta go to work on the E and C, especially the C lol

    T to E connection is bad, bar width on the top crossing bar of the T is inconsistent. All your extenisons on this one are bad, but the only ones that have potential are the ones on the E cause their the only ones that make sense. You gotta learn what extensions make sense and what extensions dont make sense(like the one on top of your O and others...). Also you need to learn where to end some of your bars, Like where the 2 bars meet to make the hole in the middle of your P cut that extra part off at the point and make it look flat still but not enlongated ya digg?
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    @Tempo - rib basically covered everything. your o looks like a d though. It looks really forced. I dont know, just put some music on, smoke some pot or drink something (or both), and just try to go with the flow of the letters, your body, and the music. I don't know lol. Loosen up. Hope that helps.

    Exchange for Atak. Tried new style. I definately need better control, so I'm gonna stick to simps for a while. Also really shitty blurry photo (my camera sucks).
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    crits welcome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tempo718 View Post
    dank that is sooo good.
    Easy there bro, it's really not that good. Not saying it's bad, but it's just extremely simple. Nothing to get hard for.

    @Tempo, Man you should go way simpler. Your letter structure is decent at best and you really need to work on your flow before you get carried away with extensions and add-ons.

    @Erk, I don't have much to say. It's mostly good but keep working with those letters because it lacks consistency in some places.

    @NouveauP, I guess there's a few things here and there that I would tweak, but overall it's pretty tight. Good looks and hopefully Alyce will return the favor somehow.

    @Atak, Man you need to go back to square one. Go back to doing simples. And I mean extremely simple. Right now your letters are inconsistent and have absolutely no flow. Your bar widths are all different, and the C is almost painful to look at. You should lose the arrows until you are good enough to incorporate them into the piece without overdoing it and actually know how to draw them. Don't worry about connecting your letters; you're not there yet. That's something that will come with time and practice, so keep pounding out simples until you understand the nature and flow of the letters. Once you're that you can start thinking about making it more elaborate.

    @Keanu, I've given crits to you before. I like it but I'd make the E bigger and the A smaller. Apart from that it's not bad.

    @ribcage, That sketch is looking solid. It has consistency and flow. Color it soon, I want to see the final result.

    @Brer, I see mad potential in that sketch, and it's not even your usual word. I'd like to see the finished product if you plan on adding more to it.
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    So many good sketches in this thread,

    repost for talking
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    even though i dont wanna admit but your shit is not as gay as it used to be but still gay.

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    Atak- you gotta start practicing real simples, like "ATAK", same bar width same height, no extension/connections and er thang. yeah thats a simple, but its pretty weak

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    http://youtu.be/94Alq44dGY8

    i haven't posted here in a while, some new shit i got to lazy to finish. as always.


 

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