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    Good, I hope you do. Just don't use those wack characters from google. If you can draw them doing something new and original, cool. Don't bite those pictures.

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    Thanks. I feel this looked much better in person. lol

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    Don't know how I feel about these. pencil sketches.

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    Post sketches and crits or shut the fuck up faggots.
    @Kasr, you've got a variety of styles going. In that blue and brown simp, your letter structure isn't the greatest. The A is actually decent, but I'm definitely not feeling the right half of the K or the S. Also try not to vary your bar width too much. The top and bottom halves of the R don't seem to line up on the left side near the S. And the blue 3D on the R is much longer than the brown 3D on the rest of the letters.
    The sketch below it (also brown and blue) doesn't have consistent bar width either, especially in the S. If the A and the R were next to each other it would flow, but the S sort of kills it. I'm not really feeling all the zigzags either in the bottom right parts of the K, A, and R. Also instead of just throwing a triangle in the middle of the A, actually line it up with the bars.
    In the first pencil sketch your letters are all over the place with tons of varied bar widths. This one's hard to crit because it's way too wild for your skill level right now. Take a step back.
    The second pencil sketch is some of the best work I've seen from you. The A is a little odd but besides that it's mostly good. This is definitely a style that you should keep pushing.
    The last one looks cool at first glance, but upon further inspection it becomes clear that it lacks letter structure. This is a style that could be good with practice but you need better letters before it's going to work.

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    yeah...

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    Rezume- try working on that M, and that arrow on the left is kinda random. thats a dope character

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    Whats up everyone, I'm new to graffiti, haven't chosen a name yet so here's some random shit I drew this week.
    Give me your criticism.
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    Thanks a lot man I really appreciate that.

    First one says: Teckno
    Second one: KASM (4 letters I thought were cool)
    Third one: Booty Warrior from The Boondocks

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    ok. Well, make sure you seperate the "T" and "E" on the first one. the second one looks like LASM more than KASM you have no top right line for the K. The character is sick man. If you clean up a few things with the arrangement you should try posting in the regular blackbook thread. Better crits there. and post the character in the character thread. you'll get props.

    ok, i just looked at your KASM one again. i see it now. but make the left of the K larger.
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    bill- clearly you have drawing skills, because that charac is dope as fuck!!!!!! but your letters need to be simpler for now. so look at what dankbudz is doing and start from there, the gradually work your way up friend. and once again that character is sooooooooo sick
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    Ok thanks for the advice guys. If I'm not busy tomorrow I'll draw up some new shit that puts what you guys said into use. As for the character I can't take all the credit as I didn't invent him, I just drew him, but thanks a lot

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    rushed sketch for some wardrobe or something im painting, reads brianna, not fussed if you can see all the letters, dont lie if you cant, cos im still trying to work it out myself
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    woah, why so fucking big?

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    @dankbudz looking good as usual
    @Shroomsh sorry man but after the BRI i cant make out any letter, i think u should make it a little more legible

    did this yesterday, trying to work on bar width and letter structure. crits please
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    Ehhhh. R is absolutely terrible. Not sure what I was thinking. lol

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    Practice before bed. Best letters? Shittiest letters?
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    ^^^ yes, keep that up!!!
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    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    Nice. Only thing is the a should be a point to a flat top, instead of rounded. Otherwise, This is good. I think I'm going to do this tomorrow. I seriously need to start at basics again. I'll follow the path to good graff with you friend

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    Simple practice. I realized that the hole in the R should have been different once I uploaded it and I'm too tired to fix it. Last flick for the night. Night everyone.

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