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    yeah...

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    Rezume- try working on that M, and that arrow on the left is kinda random. thats a dope character

    crits?
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    Whats up everyone, I'm new to graffiti, haven't chosen a name yet so here's some random shit I drew this week.
    Give me your criticism.
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    Thanks a lot man I really appreciate that.

    First one says: Teckno
    Second one: KASM (4 letters I thought were cool)
    Third one: Booty Warrior from The Boondocks

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    ok. Well, make sure you seperate the "T" and "E" on the first one. the second one looks like LASM more than KASM you have no top right line for the K. The character is sick man. If you clean up a few things with the arrangement you should try posting in the regular blackbook thread. Better crits there. and post the character in the character thread. you'll get props.

    ok, i just looked at your KASM one again. i see it now. but make the left of the K larger.
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    bill- clearly you have drawing skills, because that charac is dope as fuck!!!!!! but your letters need to be simpler for now. so look at what dankbudz is doing and start from there, the gradually work your way up friend. and once again that character is sooooooooo sick
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    Ok thanks for the advice guys. If I'm not busy tomorrow I'll draw up some new shit that puts what you guys said into use. As for the character I can't take all the credit as I didn't invent him, I just drew him, but thanks a lot

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    rushed sketch for some wardrobe or something im painting, reads brianna, not fussed if you can see all the letters, dont lie if you cant, cos im still trying to work it out myself
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    woah, why so fucking big?

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    @dankbudz looking good as usual
    @Shroomsh sorry man but after the BRI i cant make out any letter, i think u should make it a little more legible

    did this yesterday, trying to work on bar width and letter structure. crits please
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    Ehhhh. R is absolutely terrible. Not sure what I was thinking. lol

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    Practice before bed. Best letters? Shittiest letters?
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    ^^^ yes, keep that up!!!
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    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    Nice. Only thing is the a should be a point to a flat top, instead of rounded. Otherwise, This is good. I think I'm going to do this tomorrow. I seriously need to start at basics again. I'll follow the path to good graff with you friend

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    Simple practice. I realized that the hole in the R should have been different once I uploaded it and I'm too tired to fix it. Last flick for the night. Night everyone.

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    -dope ninja n like the letters rezume
    -Good shit bill!
    -shut cracking characters in the other thread matey! not so sure bout your r in the pink one either and the little bar in the a and the tiny hole in the r and the one end of the s being straight and the other end being curled suck on the one above for me think am just being picky lol
    will crit a bit more n post some of my newer shit up cuz i needs help with my letters too as they suck big fat hairy cockend! lol

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    Thanks. I'm decent with characters, thats why I want to make my letter structure better. S is a little thin and the top of the R is a little big.


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    Shut, the left side of your A is very fucked up as well. The bottom right part of the K, the bottom of the S are bad. That extensions goes nowhere... The top of your R is huge. Go simpler dude. You still really lack structure.

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    SHUT. - Looks good man. You are right about the R, but no biggie. Stay up!

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