alright work on ur letters they are all crooked and mad shaky, and dont put ur tags inside the letters it just doesnt work
Hoen, work on your bar widths and keep your lines straight. And what the fuck is up with the inside of the O?
@pointman that train is sick but like dankbudz said work on perspective more, cause right now the side of of the train looks wierd, you have to make the side get smaller as it gets further away
hey dank was that picture tooken a little bit on an angle or straight on?
@Seder, Not too bad. The angle throws off the letter widths a little bit; the S looks rather wide there. And the R isn't that smooth but it's pretty solid overall.
Go more simple. Does it say EOS? Your extensions are bad and so is the arrow placement. If the small extension towards the bottom right side of the E has 3D, then shouldn't the entire bottom of the letter have it too? Also the 3D on the middle bar should end somewhere. Make sure the length of the 3D is consistent too. The top of the S is lower than the other letters, and the bottom is higher. Try to keep them all the same height for now. But yeah, go simpler until you have more letter structure.
SED, Your letter structure is pretty good but I think if you're gonna write with an R you should work on it a bit, you often make them a bit top heavy. I don't think the tops are too big, I think the bottom is too small but your stuff is clean man.
Sir.To.You, your style is pretty original, but work on your letters and consistency like RASM said. I can't read whatever the fuck it is you wrote.
sir- i think the bit on the top hole on the s really doesn't help along with the little arrow out the bottom of it, i do like the letters themselves though i just think those bits and the other extensions are kinda more of a distraction than a positive on it, however the light red 3d looks quite tight good choice of colour with the black outline
SED- just been seing you're sketches alot lately, be good seeing you try something risky i think you have the structure down now
Basic trackside idea probably chrome and black with a yellow forcefeild
pointman- that 2 letter throw looks dope, i would add drop shadow on the right of the L though
Assbanditkid...- those pointy ends look pretty gay, make em the same size, and the top of the R looks pretty funky
quickie outline, gunna bust a few more of these out in a bit.
self crits- everyletter has a bit of retard to it. lol
The S and the first E and the R are dope work on ur D
cheers danks, loving the self crit only thing i think on that seder is the top of the s and the e i just don't like it so much as the other e has lots of space, n the r leg is a bit funky like the top of my r lol but it is pretty dammnn clean though
hey im really feeling the 1st one crits please ima outline the 1st one later