1st one- i would loose all them connections and make the N like "N" with steeeze. and take the extensions off the E and do work on it.
2nd- that flower is dope
3rd-thats a nice simple, digging th colors. the L, E, and R is a pretty weak. you are making your E's have too many bars. and that R shouldnt have that retard bend to it, ya dig? practice them simps homie!