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    besides that what about the font and my first 3d attempt?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ian View Post
    yo ribcage that is good ma man, except that E. that extension from the bottom bar to make the middle bar is pretty fucked.
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    been a while since i posted any pics, havent had much sketchin time. Crits on this bad boy?


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    also, mc satan, make letters that are made from bars, consistent width, and close together. Also make them look like normal letters for now
    Last edited by ian; 07-08-2011 at 05:33 PM.

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    allrite first attempt at having the letters be slightly on top of each other plus 3d
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    @ian your a fuck face, and why is your O a U

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    @Rib, I feel like the BA and the SE are two slightly different styles or something and it doesn't help the flow very much. The E isn't your best, as you know, but overall your letters are pretty solid. Not too sure I'm digging that disappearing extension off the top of the A though. I think it would be dope if you made it connect to form the crossbar of the A. And the O might be a little too small. Other than that, not bad. Good luck in that battle!

    @Ace, The places where your letters connect in that top sketch look bad because your bars don't line up properly there. In that second sketch, the top of the A and the hole inside it are bad. You missed 3D on the inside of the E and the top left leg of the K, and overall it's not great. (Note the bottom right left of the K)

    @Noise, Man, don't tell me that's not supposed to be an O. The N's style doesn't seem to match because it's all straight lines compared to your O, S, and E which are almost entirely curved. The bars on it are too wide too. I do like the fills and the clean outline. Keep working on that style you used for the S and the E because it does have some potential.

    McSatan, I'm not going to draw your name for you because that's something you need to learn to do on your own. As for your latest sketch, keep the 3D going the same direction; they way you made it on the C isn't working. You're missing some pink on the bottom right side of the M, and the 3D on the top of the S is bad. Keep all the diagonal lines that form the 3D either parallel, or angled towards a vanishing point. It's called perspective. Also remember to watch your bar widths. Widen that S up and cross those A's.
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    actually i wanted to try it out without the crosses on the A also i know i fucked the 3d on the C and the S. does someone mine doing an S and a C in simple format so i can see the 3d first hand. it's been bothering me

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    Glad to say that this is where its at
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    @satan, me doing you a piece would be the worst thing for you.. you would start to bite, not on purpose but you will. ya have to develop your own style

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    well can someone just do a simple 3d s and c im fuckign them up badly need soem reference

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    ian - like rib said ur O looks kinda like a U, but other then that i like it
    Shroomsh - that looks sick, i really like the cracks in it

    just colored this in, crits please
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    ok both S and C 3d went a lot better this time, but i feel like i may have messed up the T.
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    Ace.k- thats actually not that bad, you coulda cleaned it up a bit more though
    Shroomsh- lookin sick, maybe extend that bar on the X more downward. the one that goes like /
    EWL- work on smoother lines and you are missing the 3d on part of the E, and that top bar is funky.
    Mc Satan- practice more, dont overlap letters, if you do then make them consistent for each letter. , that S is funky and you should work on your lines.

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    thanks im jsut trying out new things as i go along,i knwo i gotta work on my S for some reason its always ugly. now was i right about the 3d on the T looking odd or is it jsut me?

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    its always ugly cause you need to keep practicing.
    the 3d looks weird cause of the angle. since you got all the negative space on the left and right it looks funny. and you are missing some on the S.
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    oh yeah just realized that on the S oh well at least personally i feel improvement they are taking a lot less each time. gto any suggestions on anything else i should practice?

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    your letters. and take your time.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Messer View Post
    sin- i love your karaks and style...
    dank- diggin' them simple rounded letters.
    joks- try disconnecting those letters, they look like youre going for a tech style but it took me ages to realise what it said
    mcsatan- drop the kiss/lighting bolt S and keep rocking them simples, try bringing them closer together and overlapping them a little.

    doodled this at my mums house, might work on it and make it a karak:


    pen ran out midway through this...payday tommorrow so im gonna pic up some cheap pens:
    bump for crits, mcsatan bring your letters closer together and bulk 'em out...
    funny shit.

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    allrite thanks, just an idea i had but should i start moving the vanishing point around also? to try out different angles?

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    ...just when I thought nah! couldnt become any stupider, he goes and makes another stupid account... yo nah! youve already been banned twice you little ugly troll, your on the road to a permaban. We no wan that tho cause then who is gonna make me look good

    im on a muthafucking posting frenzy cause my laptop is actually letting me use the internet...
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    ok tried bigger letters and switched up the vanishing point off a bit to the side instead of center. realized to late that the N was to far away but other than that im actually kinda satisfied.
    what do you guys think?
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    yikes, you shouldnt be satisfied with that...

    You need to start making smarter decisions with your letters. Thats a pencil up there right? Use that pencil bro. Lol I got jokes, but on the real take more time and sketch your shit out. then after you havesketched letters draw your 3d on w/ pencil so you can fix your fuck ups before you ink it. An example of making smarter decisions would be- if your going to do a vanishing point, pick a point or spot that doesnt give you an awkward 3d. Like how your 3d is different for your A and N then it is for the rest of the letters.


 

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