sin- i love your karaks and style...
dank- diggin' them simple rounded letters.
joks- try disconnecting those letters, they look like youre going for a tech style but it took me ages to realise what it said
mcsatan- drop the kiss/lighting bolt S and keep rocking them simples, try bringing them closer together and overlapping them a little.
doodled this at my mums house, might work on it and make it a karak:
pen ran out midway through this...payday tommorrow so im gonna pic up some cheap pens: