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    Xist, your throws aren't bad but keep working on them. X's are tricky.

    Nice page Rezume.

    And this SKAM burns you Skeletor.
    http://www.bombingscience.com/index....ty/127/style/1

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rasm View Post
    Xist, your throws aren't bad but keep working on them. X's are tricky.

    Nice page Rezume.

    And this SKAM burns you Skeletor.
    http://www.bombingscience.com/index....ty/127/style/1
    ya ive seen his shit. its alot better than me no doubt but hell its not like im gonna start havin beef with him, i just like to write skam. every god damn name is taken so fuck.
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    throws are soo much easier with paint and a fat cap,
    going bombing tonight so ill do a few and post them for proper crits on what the syle actually looks like, but yeah, i dont normally do throws, i piece a lot more..

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    What y'all think? Go critt^^^
    REVNoner!

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    Quote Originally Posted by REVNoner View Post

    What y'all think? Go critt^^^
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    make the letters the same size close the hole on the e and push it out a bit more
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    crits please!

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    Quote Originally Posted by REVNoner View Post
    What y'all think? Go critt^^^
    REVNoner!
    Man, quit posting the same 30-second simples over and over and demanding crits without even giving crits first.

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    Not feelin it Cane. Bar widths are wack and just the style of the piece is lame. No offense.

    Simps/rollers maybe and a new throw idea. Crits.





    Edit: Ignore that bottom tag. Did it at like 4 in the morning lol.

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    i was too lazy to try and fit in a "Z" lol
    colours pop more in real life tho... shittay camera ftw


    Jok(z)? by JokzOner, on Flickr

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    cool letters bro, only the o seems a bit bad...

    and about the colors, download photoshop and edit them there

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    just some shity random words

    i chose these at random i dont write any of these

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    Quote Originally Posted by OvanOne View Post
    cool letters bro, only the o seems a bit bad...

    and about the colors, download photoshop and edit them there
    yea wtv, its mainly about the letters anyways. thx for the comment man

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jokz View Post
    i was too lazy to try and fit in a "Z" lol
    colours pop more in real life tho... shittay camera ftw


    Jok(z)? by JokzOner, on Flickr

    liking your colors and your style but the K is kinda throwin me off, still sick tho

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    just testing my new molotow one4all 127 and 227. any crits?

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    jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary.

    jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one
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    yo last one on the bottom is pretty good. The one above it could use some fixing of the proportions like the right leg of R is super thick compared to the thickness of all the other letters. Your extensions also make it so your letters arent defined, except for most of the very bottom one

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary.

    jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one
    thks for the crits, this was just a testing of the markers, can you give me any crits on the lion i posted here? its a project for the room of my young brother.
    and thks to rib for the crits 2

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    Yo Jokz thats pretty cool but i think you should work on the k, it kinda looks like a R

    nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally

    MN Nice - i like that throw up, pretty clean...keep drawing

    any crits for me?? not really feeling what i did with the Y and the A.

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    Btw, this is like my 5th straight letter

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    I don't know how bad the y and a is, but the fact your A is so far from the R really makes it look bad. try mirroring the top of your E with the bottom a little. looks dumb flat at the bottom like that. The R is was top heavy and the bottom leg looks a bit stumpy. Practice straight letters like the are on your key board. notice an R leg doesn't have to come from the corner of the top and horizontal and back bar. Keep working.

    Jiska your characters are always boss, I like your style but work on them letters. I don't feel how squished the bottom of those S's are.

    Jok, your k looks like an R other than that the shits sick to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by REVNoner View Post

    What y'all think? Go critt^^^
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    heres a crit work on ur tags they are totally POO and for ur simple... the R isnt to bad it needs a bit of work on the top left area and the bottom right leg also the E is way to small compared to your RVN 3d is pretty much good and make ur lines straight not all jagged as hell ur R especially!
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    it's probably because Polar sold his True Religion pants.


 

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