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    yo last one on the bottom is pretty good. The one above it could use some fixing of the proportions like the right leg of R is super thick compared to the thickness of all the other letters. Your extensions also make it so your letters arent defined, except for most of the very bottom one

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary.

    jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one
    thks for the crits, this was just a testing of the markers, can you give me any crits on the lion i posted here? its a project for the room of my young brother.
    and thks to rib for the crits 2

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    Yo Jokz thats pretty cool but i think you should work on the k, it kinda looks like a R

    nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally

    MN Nice - i like that throw up, pretty clean...keep drawing

    any crits for me?? not really feeling what i did with the Y and the A.

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    Btw, this is like my 5th straight letter

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    I don't know how bad the y and a is, but the fact your A is so far from the R really makes it look bad. try mirroring the top of your E with the bottom a little. looks dumb flat at the bottom like that. The R is was top heavy and the bottom leg looks a bit stumpy. Practice straight letters like the are on your key board. notice an R leg doesn't have to come from the corner of the top and horizontal and back bar. Keep working.

    Jiska your characters are always boss, I like your style but work on them letters. I don't feel how squished the bottom of those S's are.

    Jok, your k looks like an R other than that the shits sick to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by REVNoner View Post

    What y'all think? Go critt^^^
    REVNoner!
    heres a crit work on ur tags they are totally POO and for ur simple... the R isnt to bad it needs a bit of work on the top left area and the bottom right leg also the E is way to small compared to your RVN 3d is pretty much good and make ur lines straight not all jagged as hell ur R especially!
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    it's probably because Polar sold his True Religion pants.

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    since theres nothing but shit on this page, ill actually post something aight kids
    this is what simple pieces look like when time is taken so Rev Noner this is what to look forward to.

    for a hell nice chick, took about 4 hours straight for the record, done with fineliners
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    yall need to get off revn's case.
    it's his choice whether he wants to progress or not. no one's concern If he doesn't want to evolve his style.
    Lotta bombers out there doing chrome simps like these back to back all day, and they get more ups than any of us here. so as far as I'm concerned, my crits are the following: wear your lines cleaner, adjust those bar alignments on your R, get everything nice and smooth, make a proper shadow instead of the 3D/shadow mutant, and you're golden.
    go destroy your city with that shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ERAYS View Post
    nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally
    umm how about you
    Last edited by nah!; 07-25-2011 at 09:25 AM.

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    sup guys, im new to the forum. check out my work. let me know what you think.

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    thinking about making this into slapssss:
    funny shit.

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    fact: messer has Blue Pussy Drips

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    SENS-Oner, the VERY most common graff name is Sense... anything like sens sense senser sensor whatever is worn out. hell I even have a Sens in my own crew here dude... you're defo not the first one to be writing sens one. I can also tell you that it's not too late to change it.

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    shroomsh - still killing it, nice work.
    nah - you've got your bars even and they're going the right way, but your letters are pretty ugly, like the bottom of that E. I'd get rid of the connection from the A to the Y too.


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    women despite being pretty, are always problems sooner or later so if we all work together we can nip their bullshit in the bud with minimal controversy.
    - anonymous

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    that ERAYS wasnt my piece

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    Oh yea, fuck. Well then the crits are for the guy that you quoted.
    women despite being pretty, are always problems sooner or later so if we all work together we can nip their bullshit in the bud with minimal controversy.
    - anonymous

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    not entirely done, gotta put the colorful street fighter energy around his hands,
    did it with prismas, micron and colored pencil(first time using dems)
    but idk when i'll have the markers so for now enjoy, thats akuma btw
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    diggin that shit rezume6!!^
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    it's probably because Polar sold his True Religion pants.

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    debtr- the E's tight but everything else is wack

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    ...shitty flick for xist
    and for a buddy


    http://signup.leagueoflegends.com/?ref=4f8f91b2e3b4c682128764

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    Two of my latest drawings in the blackbook





    personally it hink the second one is good, but the first one sucks balls

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    I have a hard time believing those two pieces came from the same person





 

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