a few more. Ive been messing with the word elder, elbo.
Could some one give me some pointers?
a few more. Ive been messing with the word elder, elbo.
Could some one give me some pointers?
Both Unfinished.
Crits?
hey guys, this is my first post here, hope you like my shit.
i know the markers suck, cause theyre almost dead and i didnt have time to get my hands on new stuff, so dont pay attention to the fill, just comment the letter structure and shit like that
whats the word?
youve got to be kidding me
and the word is OVAN, same as my nickname
i made this one today, for a competition on deviantart...
hahah, my bad bro. couldnt tell if that was a v.Originally Posted by OvanOne
@Extinct, I can't really crit characters because I don't draw them myself, but I like the style you're going for on the sketch. The letters don't seem to flow very well with one another because the I is too small and too far away from the R. It really kills the flow. I like the word Eris though; there's actually a dwarf planet named Eris that's larger than Pluto but 3 times further out.
@Jiska, that's super dope homie! I'm digging the character too!
@GoldWanger, work on your consistency. The middle part of the M in that top piece is practically nonexistant. The C is also very rough. Your A's in that bottom one are way too wide compared to the E and P, and the E is very boring and bland. In the Pursy sketch, the PUR seems to flow but the S doesn't fit, and I don't know if I'm digging the backwards Y. I'm not feeling the ENDR one. It has no flow or consistency, and your drop shadow is royally screwed. The ones below it are kinda meh, and so are those hand styles. The sketch at the bottom has some potential but I'd like to see you work on it more. You definitely seem to have some style and potential, just keep at it.
@Ovan, I'm definitely not liking the O in that yellow one, and the rest of the letters are bent in all the wrong places. Also lose those blocky chunks at the top... they're so overused it's not even funny. In the second one, I'm not feeling those little bumps you threw in all over the tops of your letters... they just don't look that good. And that's literally the least original thing to put at the bottom of the letter I. I hate seeing that shit because I know the artist didn't come up with that idea on their own... Aside from that, keep the bar widths more consistent and try coming up with your own style and add-ons.
Here's a sketch that's still pretty rough. There are several parts of it that I need to drop/re-do, but I was just looking for some crits before I ink and color it.
It says GOFAR.
EDIT: ... I know the lines are sketchy... I said it was a rough sketch.
Last edited by Rasm; 07-20-2011 at 06:38 PM.
im digging the A. and the extra shadow things.
Looks good so far, but I get a vibe off of it that I get in a lot of my sketches where I feel like it still needs something but can't put my finger on what it is.
random stuff i been working on
sinn - your a beast
Revm - throw some 3d on there
bumped for crits
rasm - try to give your lines more purpose so they dont look so sketchy
haha, never thought of working a piece out on a whiteboard; that's a good idea.
project for my room :P any crits?
golfwanger, if you're trying to write apear, I advise you look up APEAR from LA... I guess he's with MTA
good looks bro. im not trying to die young(:
ill stick with ELDR.
that looks great bro.
only thing i can see, is make the bottom part of the mane a little more flowy.
but other than that great job.
Last edited by Phat 2; 07-21-2011 at 02:50 AM.
Batman/Spartan/Elephant Hybrid.
^thats a mf doom elephant if im correct. not spartan
and its pre sick
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
posting a pic to feel cool. pretty shitty
you are indeed correct therefore the "MF JOKZ" :P
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