bottom page bump
bottom page bump
Last edited by Mc Satan; 07-30-2011 at 06:40 AM.
i gave you feedback on that one in previous page. i dont like that lil nubs sticking out
same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.
btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.
not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything
satan- keep working on your bars, and your 3d is off on some of the bends. dont put a hole in the dot of the I. And i think it would be better letter arrangement if it were all caps but thats just me. You have the right idea just dont get ahead of your self.
Cuore- your U looks like a L, your O looks like a lower case b a lil bit, and your R and your E are ugly. No hate just callin it as i sees it. lol But your bars are decent, i dont like the nubs either. And i can tell that your trying to get the outside of the piece to be a certain shape. dont do that yet. itll come naturally. if you concentrate on that then your not concentrating on your letters.
i need to get a job first which im working on now, after that i order markers. and sorry about that its just that even though im not very experience i give crits whenever i can. and i not a fan of ppl posting and not giving out any crits
Mostly golden oldies
And dont order markers man, go to hobby lobby or a craft store or walmart and pick up some decos, markers dont matter at your level dont waste money. cop some crayolas lol
Last edited by HëRbN; 07-30-2011 at 02:13 PM.
live in aruba no craft stores or similar here. so if im gettign markers i want markers that will let me be able to do at teh very least what these watercolor pencils allow me to do. therefore go out for good ones right away. also i love that panda skull thing. and finally im seeing PH combo main reason why i didn't do them all capital letters was because i had no idea wtf to do with the h
my tools are killing me
straight letters! first off. for the throw up lose the whole pointy shit on the bottom make em all the same size fix the N so theres actually a middle bar. for the piece alot of work, needs to be done , CANE should look like that your drop shadow is off, lose all extensions , make your E actually legible, and try again, oh and the C on the handstyle looks like a D. but i learned that if you practice your straight letters the better you get the cleaner your style gets, the cleaner your fills get , practice makes perfect keep it up,
yeah you needa go bare bones simple and for the time being give up on the arrows, shadows, extensions and any other thrills. New to graff thread
fluffy - always gotta love a drunk quicky
kilsr love that simple, ill do an exchange ill start it now and finish when i get off work, i write Del/ Delone