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    Phile, i like your most recent sketch, the h and P are sweet

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    thanks shroom here it is inked everyone gimme crits please.. personally the 3d on the I seems a bit iffy to me
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    ad coloring is done. this is the most intricate coloring ive done so far so crits on it to pls
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    this is a style i came up with on the 13 hour ride back from florida, got home, sketched it out a last time, added color and heres the result, comments welcome, especially since im workin on a more complex style than most of my other work which i should post but later when i take flicks

    edit: flick aint showin up for me, let me know ill upload to photobucket and repost if needed after resize
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    i actually like that style, suits the colour scheeme well, cant really read what it says, but thats not the point, with a bit of refinement that could become something original for you and, with some work, ill respect you for coming up with something original

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    bottom page bump

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    yo guys long time no post. let me getcha feedback.
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    i gave you feedback on that one in previous page. i dont like that lil nubs sticking out

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    same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

    btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sadgeh View Post
    same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

    btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.
    When you post something at the bottom of a previous page and then a new page starts without getting crits or views, so you post it again.

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    not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mc Satan View Post
    not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything
    Chill out dude. If no one is critting it, it can't be too bad. You should've had the E taller to keep the symmetry with the P, but otherwise your bar widths are even for the most part and no unnecessary extensions. Keep at it and get those markers already lol

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    satan- keep working on your bars, and your 3d is off on some of the bends. dont put a hole in the dot of the I. And i think it would be better letter arrangement if it were all caps but thats just me. You have the right idea just dont get ahead of your self.

    Cuore- your U looks like a L, your O looks like a lower case b a lil bit, and your R and your E are ugly. No hate just callin it as i sees it. lol But your bars are decent, i dont like the nubs either. And i can tell that your trying to get the outside of the piece to be a certain shape. dont do that yet. itll come naturally. if you concentrate on that then your not concentrating on your letters.
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    i need to get a job first which im working on now, after that i order markers. and sorry about that its just that even though im not very experience i give crits whenever i can. and i not a fan of ppl posting and not giving out any crits

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    Mostly golden oldies

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    And dont order markers man, go to hobby lobby or a craft store or walmart and pick up some decos, markers dont matter at your level dont waste money. cop some crayolas lol
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    live in aruba no craft stores or similar here. so if im gettign markers i want markers that will let me be able to do at teh very least what these watercolor pencils allow me to do. therefore go out for good ones right away. also i love that panda skull thing. and finally im seeing PH combo main reason why i didn't do them all capital letters was because i had no idea wtf to do with the h

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    straight letters! first off. for the throw up lose the whole pointy shit on the bottom make em all the same size fix the N so theres actually a middle bar. for the piece alot of work, needs to be done , CANE should look like that your drop shadow is off, lose all extensions , make your E actually legible, and try again, oh and the C on the handstyle looks like a D. but i learned that if you practice your straight letters the better you get the cleaner your style gets, the cleaner your fills get , practice makes perfect keep it up,

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    kinda messy cuz i am kinda drunk, and havent sketched anything in a long ass time. pretty good for almost a year of not sketching lol
    and SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES.
    simples turn me on, so i stick to that

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    yeah you needa go bare bones simple and for the time being give up on the arrows, shadows, extensions and any other thrills. New to graff thread
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