crits?
i like the face, dont like the tag, and it needs to be inked, get on it!!
i dont like the piece, or any of the letters on the page, but the face of the charo is alright, ink the charo
first post on here, not the best i got, be postin more soon. im down wit constructive crit. i been up for bou 2 and a half years now, lookin for more tips, thnx
~Get Nipped~
I've been interested in the scene since 98. Never took my writing very seriously. I was far more into djing and raving. I just wanted to post a few old pieces and a couple I have done more recently when the mood would strike. feed back is appriciated. I doodle from time to time, but just to entertain myself, but now that I find my self with more free time I want to do it more often. Been doing some work with canvases and paint which is completely new to me. First post on the forum. Cheers guys.this is the only one on my computer. the link is to my flickr. http://www.flickr.com/photos/antik_1
Last edited by Phat 2; 07-28-2011 at 01:33 PM.
i see a resemblance in your tag to the user ani-33's signature here on the forums... mere coincidence?
first time on the forum. I'll look'em up though. been using antik one (which I am sure many others have too) for over a decade now. I use it as my dj name.
edit. looked him up... not seeing of what you speak. just something about bandwidth....
Last edited by PETER; 07-28-2011 at 02:14 PM.
shroom completely forgot about the trade until today. decided to do something colorful for once
Thats alright ey phile ill have yours up later
no probs, also i really need markers dammit. can only do so much with these things
EDIT: forgot to ask crits please
Last edited by Mc Satan; 07-28-2011 at 10:42 PM.
Messing about with the 3d a little. Used a deco for the paint, need some new markers.. anyhow, let me know what you think.
It is impossible to keep a straight face in the presence of one or more kittens. ~Cynthia E. VarnadoOriginally Posted by ribcage
^ smoother end to end transiotions like on top of your R and top and bottm of the C and top of O and top of E and bottom left of U. those little pieces of bar sticking out look good to you?
hello everyone, just posting something i made last night, hope you like it
not exactly a book... spray paint and acrylic on wood. thoughts?
skeletor: firs pic i dont like anything in it sorry. second pic i like although i think if the D was a bit bigger it would look better
cuore: i like your 3d but i agree with rib not to convinced about the lil bits sticking out
ovan: like everything but the left leg of the N the bottom of it just looks awkward to me
Peter: i like the color scheme like the A and the N but after that i don't like your letters at all to be honest
finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?
if it where me I would make the I and the e taller to match the height of the rest of the letters. you could do this by elongating the dot of the i (which looks kinda like a cheereo at the moment) and the top of the e... maybe something like this?just a thought. also I noticed the base of the i gets thinner at the bottom. not to be picky, but you're pretty even across the board except there.
not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix
no, the photo is turned sideways and I don't have the ability to flip it sorry. but I think that height and shape might fit with what you are going for (with it up right.) worth a shot anyway. just doodle it a few times to see if it gives you something you like in the style you're going for.
:edit: just was looking at the p. you could use that same basic shape to fashion an e as well.
Last edited by PETER; 07-29-2011 at 12:06 PM.
Mc. it looks like you're using colored pencil for the xist?
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