EDIT: inked will be coloring in about an hour or so please crit it
EDIT: inked will be coloring in about an hour or so please crit it
Last edited by Mc Satan; 08-02-2011 at 08:26 PM.
Well McSatan, I see where you got yo concept, and that games gonna be fucking amazing.
But please just keep your letters simpler, don't try and bend the bars yet, and don't try to give the whole piece a flow like that. At least not yet. I especially don't like the S, because it's pretty sloppy and wtf did you do with the top end of it haha. If you consider that an extension don't do that yet either. SIMPLER DAWG. That's all I'm saying, no beef.
actually mcnasty picked the word and i thought id add a lil sackboy vikign dude when i was done. to be honest i wast really thinking per say i jsut started drawing and it came otu liek that, i kinda liked it untill i did the 3d
If it makes you feel better I like vikings. Lol his helmets funny and cool.
But yeah I get whatchu sayin, just do what works for you. And improve on it hah
meh vikign dude will be saved i liek him word will be redone
Word haha. And I'm sure you'll like it more the second time
im still coloring vikign dude first though a shame not to color the lil dude
haha thats whats up. Do him justice dawg
viking dude got colored
.......what compulses you to post every little thing you do? It aint no thang at the moment since no one else is posting, but in the future please dont post every little thing you do to a sketch unless its in one post, just post the beginning image and the finished project, cause its starting to get annoying
ima crit your sketch tho.your barwidths are really inconsistent, your K lacks structure same with your Y and R. The I is the only lower case letter... kinda weird. Only thing I like about the sketch is the vantage idea, if you would have put the character above the Y it woulda made it better...
Last edited by ribcage; 08-03-2011 at 12:39 AM.
actually this one i wanted crits before i moved on but no one was around so yeah, either way ill do the word tomorrow again probably put 2 smaller dudes fighting somehow into it
Crit the shit outa this
Connect the top of the O. ^
yeah i noticed that right as i put the line there haha, thanks any other suggestions?
here's somthing new...
Ader try and keep your bar widths the same. Namely the bottom of the R. The legs ya know. Nah try and grt your S as the same size as your M and O. And Afro that second thing looks fresh. Nice style only thing i don't like is the top of the R. I feel like that bar shouldn't bend inward. Maybe outward instead haha
haha yeha man your wright newer seen that before tnx
Haha no problem and that's the only thing that stuck out ta me. You should color that
Props to Sear for being an actual writer, instead of a sketchbook junkie.
decided to go back to my old word, F's, L's, and T's are starting to piss me off
Hate the C on this one, but either way, Crits please
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