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    arse after 5 pages full , i ended up really like that P in my 4 attempts don't really knwo why. which is why i made them bigger and modified the P a lil on each one, thnks for the tag btw. also you need to fatten up that leg on the R it look a bit out of place like that

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    @Satan I like 4 too. I think everything flows nice. I want to see the tag with a fatter marker, i think that might look a little better and help fill in them empty spaces!!!!. Crits on my sketch
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    get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?

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    Quote Originally Posted by mista_dza View Post
    get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?
    That'll happen with crappy notebook paper and any #2 pencil.


    Too many posts from me lately lol But thats clean as fuck, dank. VVV Good work. Keep the stone and moss theme in the 3d.
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    ^lol, not rearry

    still gotta put some 3d on this, but can i get me some crits?
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    its nice except the E and R are a little low
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    slanted bar of R still bugs me, the width gets wider from left to right.talkpic

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    quick ten minute sketch before i go surf, crits?

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    @Dankbudz: slap some 3d on that, my suggestion is go inward on your letters so it kills the negative space
    @Ribcage: looks cool but I think you should add some curve into those letters, especially on the R.
    @ATAK: does that say Desa?

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    extension on the S is wack, extension on the top left of C is super wack, extension on the K is like the one on the s

    ...too late. redoin this one now tho

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    hey yall wadup can I get some advice here?
    I kno I dont do many crits, reason is I am not too good at pointing the weak points out yet.
    Maybe after I begin to understand the mechanics of how things go I could be more helpfull. Peace
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    dont puts so many edges n shit, you gotta go back to basics and write it out like BRI or BAI, none of that other lame stuff


    3d got a bit messed up
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    your character is badassz

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    I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
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    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    Damn Reach im really feeling that style bro, would you like to exchange

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    ^ right bottom bar of the R should have been consistently fat, not the weird thin to fat back to thin look you gave it. your E looks a bit awkward to me but i honestly can not pinpoint why. other than that i like your piece and the fill, allthough the swirly bit on the V needs a better connection to the rest of the green , that should be a very easy fix though.

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    Tempo. I like the fill. The middle bar of the E should have been higher more in the exactly middle, now it looks weird.

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