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    its nice except the E and R are a little low
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    slanted bar of R still bugs me, the width gets wider from left to right.talkpic

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    quick ten minute sketch before i go surf, crits?

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    @Dankbudz: slap some 3d on that, my suggestion is go inward on your letters so it kills the negative space
    @Ribcage: looks cool but I think you should add some curve into those letters, especially on the R.
    @ATAK: does that say Desa?

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    extension on the S is wack, extension on the top left of C is super wack, extension on the K is like the one on the s

    ...too late. redoin this one now tho

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    hey yall wadup can I get some advice here?
    I kno I dont do many crits, reason is I am not too good at pointing the weak points out yet.
    Maybe after I begin to understand the mechanics of how things go I could be more helpfull. Peace
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    dont puts so many edges n shit, you gotta go back to basics and write it out like BRI or BAI, none of that other lame stuff


    3d got a bit messed up
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    your character is badassz

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    pen freestyle
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    I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills

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    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    Damn Reach im really feeling that style bro, would you like to exchange

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    ^ right bottom bar of the R should have been consistently fat, not the weird thin to fat back to thin look you gave it. your E looks a bit awkward to me but i honestly can not pinpoint why. other than that i like your piece and the fill, allthough the swirly bit on the V needs a better connection to the rest of the green , that should be a very easy fix though.

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    Tempo. I like the fill. The middle bar of the E should have been higher more in the exactly middle, now it looks weird.

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    @Seder, good work man, you've come a long way since you started. Keep it up.

    @Aeso, that's pretty fresh for a quick freestyle man!

    @Tempo, The E looks awkward because the middle bar is too low, and it's too curvy in the wrong places. Your bar widths are all over the place, and your letters are spaced out too much and at inconsistent intervals. Also, your 3D is off, most noticeably on the E.

    @sadgeh, looks like that took you about 10 minutes. I'd like to see a sketch that you took your time one. The letters are very square, throw some curves in there, especially in the E and the R. Also keep your bar widths consistent as well as the height and width of your letters.

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    @butters...really like the SCANK in general, has a nice flow to it and I just really like b&w. Though I have to agree with ribcage that the extension on the s is a bit to much. The extension going from the bottom C to the bottom s might have looked better if you would have let it come out of the C(sorry it's hard to explain what I mean in english). Really like the shape of that K, original(atleast to me it is). Your handstyle really needs some work though

    @Aeso...nice pennage...nice handstyles asfar as I can see, I don't think I would have put that little extension thingy on left side of the A though.

    @Rave...try and make your letters overlap...it will become more solid as a whole.

    @Sadgeh Maak je letters wat breder, maakt het hele inkleuren ook wat makkelijker. Er zitten hier en daar wel wat leuke vormen tussen maar volgens mij loop je te ver op jezelf vooruit. Het is al moeilijk genoeg om simpele letters zonder extension er goed uit te laten zien. Ik hoop dat je hier iets aan hebt, zo niet...nou dan niet ps. staat er nou "kanker of hoer"?

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    ^^^My opinion is upload the image here so i don't have to go there to look at it lol
    erm personally quite like the shape of you letters myself reminds me a shyne but like at the beginning needs alot of work to pull of that style though,but hell why not try someones got to
    Tempo-yeeesssssss!!! those fat letters look beaut!
    Aeso- tight! nice and easy on the eyes noting out of place there
    Danks- thats just fucking awesome mate i love the little guy and the 3d on the letters really looks like their being pulled back by a vacuum or something and the detail on the green mold on the letters...u just keep doing what your doing
    Reach- never been around to comment but been looking at your sketches for a while...nice i likes!
    Scank- like everything think the c is a little weird/ skinny but still likes it alot
    atak-like it but it looks like its been chopped in half down the bottom of the page
    sadgeh- slow down a little bit bud....generally i can make out the letters and some bits don't look bad but its a bit to extreme (like the last r) for me and like i keep telling tempo fatten your letters up abit
    had a little play about with this from a song i heard while i was doodling sooo.......not quite so sure on the fill lol

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    dont flair the bars

    lol saw some aesop tags near me


 

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