afro i think yours is pretty sick and unique. and slvr your skull drawing is alright but the letters need more work.
latest sketch
afro i think yours is pretty sick and unique. and slvr your skull drawing is alright but the letters need more work.
latest sketch
Last edited by Skeletor1134; 08-03-2011 at 04:26 PM.
Skeletor that fill and background is sick! But your letters are a little whack. I don't like the k because it doesn't really look like a k. Fix the top legs. And the m, I don't really like the flat part of it. And try n keep your bar sizes the same
thanks man, yeah my letters are pretty whack but i was trying to keep it simple while still being a little unique. i tried to keep the letters basic and box like. but thanks for the critique.
New here, i write beast and since 12oz is down temporarily thought i'd try this
Fucked up my B on this one
Old dies sketch
Last edited by Phat 2; 08-03-2011 at 06:07 PM.
^i have a friend who used to rock that name, then he got busted haha.
anyway, crits; dont do that overlapping bars thing, looks wack. your bar width is a bit weird too, and finally leave extensions alone for a while till your structure gets a bit better.
EDIT: your S is hurting big time too
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
Beast, try and keep your bar width the same. I noticed that mostly on your Bs. Go even simpler. Like on your second one that S isn't the best, it looks like an underline and a P. I don't like the E because of the extension going in, lose that. Just my advice.
Mcnasty,nah, shroom, you guys ready with crome? im itching to see the results
one a yalls gonna win. Thats all I'm sayin haha
i feel like doing a sketch soon
ok redid skyrim crit me please
im gettin tired of capital Ls so i made it lowercase, for simplicity, not a big fan of the E needs some work but i like my D so far, any crits would be nice, oh and i realized the lines in all the letters with the little square is lame, but in the L it makes it look like a I sorta.
McSatan I like that one alot more! It looks alot cleaner my dude. I wouldn't have like, made the K and S as crooked though. And Del my dude haha that D is nice as hell. I feel like the E should've had its middle bar straighter and I like the L just cuz it's so simple. But I agree witchu sayin that the line and square makes it look like an I haha
i think it would have looked better without the drippy bits to be honest. i about the letter themselves i agree with you i do not like the E at all it just looks odd, im drawing a complete blank on how to do it otherwise though, sorry.
SOL only thing is i drew it to damn big cant fit in a viking dude
im gonna work on that E, lol the drippy thing was for the laughs i wanted to see what itd look like, more or less.
kilsr
trying new shit out. rough sketch btw and i kinda went bigger at the end. didnt notice til after
i'll try anything once. cept gay shit.
mcsatan ur R is to small
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blurry pics >.>
for the crome battle
unfinished for the skyrim battle.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
That S makes no sense to me...
Fluff those letters are hurtin right now but they got potential, finish it.
Quick "NORTH" outline, crits would be appreciated. I wish I'd done more with the H..
Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 08-04-2011 at 03:18 AM.
FREE DKAY
bump for crits. only got one last pageName: Aobi
i realize the "o" isnt connected at the top)i know it isnt very good im just getting back into graff. took a year or so break
Ader-you 3d isnt very consistent and could use work, and it looked to me like the fill was supposed to be a cityscape, which would be cool if done correctly and i don't really like the backwards heart on the I. Imo
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