bump for crits. only got one last pageName: Aobi
i realize the "o" isnt connected at the top)i know it isnt very good im just getting back into graff. took a year or so break
bump for crits. only got one last page
Ader-you 3d isnt very consistent and could use work, and it looked to me like the fill was supposed to be a cityscape, which would be cool if done correctly and i don't really like the backwards heart on the I. Imo
McSatan your R is a Lil' to small lol. But you can fit the Viking guys head and maybe an arm above the y and the r
ok fixed the R made it bigger, also penciled in a horned helm,should i keep it or not?
Nah just like...have the ragdoll coming out of the piece.
But if you fail at that keep the helmet lol
tried the rag doll it wasn't looking good but i still wanted to add something to it, therefore the helmet
Well in that case good luck! And try and draw your lines faster and smoother
mcsatan- looks good, R seems a little squished tho
del- those drips are weird, and that E seems awkward
kilsr- i like that style, throw some 3D on it and it'll be bangin
north- too many extensions, and the connections seem a little forced. and dont do the overlapping bar thing.
ader- you need to go simpler, the extensions and connections dont look good, and that fill and background are real sloppy
better flick for crome battle, i know the arrow coming off the E is wack, thought id give it a try tho
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
dammit nah! sell a kidney for them or something
@tasty on R horizntal bar that starts the right leg of R top line of it should not be full where it meets the top right part of R ya dig? Leave that part open and it will start making your R's look better
ok managed to get viking dude to look good this time, crits while i go eat dinner please. also possible color scheme's would be nice
Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.
that right there somehow sounded pervy to me
lol I didn't write it like that... but hey whatever works
^wheres your sketches at dude?
....colored the dale fs
rib- i like the letters and the fill, but the background seems a little sloppy to me, especially the drips
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
I feel it, just a rough draft freestyle for the tfrrt... coloring the final draft, dont know if I like it better than the simple tho. I have like 40 somethin pages full colored in the book im workin in(not all by me) and its hella hard to think of new backgrounds that I havent done yet, so for this I just went quick and easy, nothin special
ok i colored this just wondering whether i should do a color outline or not
EDIT: btw hated your word mcnasty :P
Last edited by Mc Satan; 08-04-2011 at 11:14 PM.
rib- i think the background is just a lil accent 2 that peice but the peice in it self is nice to see. reguardless it came out nice
satan- feelin it way more after you threw some color into the peice but the I seems a lil lonley back there like it did'nt step up to the roll call on tha peice. i ono but good improvment anyhow.
tasty - ono wa happen to the 3d (backdrop) whatever u did it dont look right for some reason, try it again wit a diff 3d effect an lets see it after.
Last edited by Tempo718; 08-05-2011 at 12:02 AM.
I smoke Vega
I'm on vacation with my aunt and my moms and my lil cousin. Not much time
To sketch. But if you want me to post everything I've ever painted and drawn I will later haha. And ribcage that's clean. I really like the colors of the letters, I dunno why lol. Satan i like the 3d and ragdoll fill, but wtf is with that blue and brownish fill for the letters. Looks weird to me haha
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