Drew this while bored.
ESCE - Make your middle bar come out more in your E's
sema - I can't even see that.
KAST - Work more on your bars before you push shit outwards and do different stuff. Also, take off the highlights.
EMACE - Some of it is kinda sloppy, like the first A. It's alright.
SOL - The only letter I can make out is the S. Don't connect letters yet.
BEK - I don't like your extensions on the B or how it connects to the E. Otherwise it looks decent.
2LIVES - L is too tall, and I overall don't really like it, but nothing specifically I don't like about it.