^ right bottom bar of the R should have been consistently fat, not the weird thin to fat back to thin look you gave it. your E looks a bit awkward to me but i honestly can not pinpoint why. other than that i like your piece and the fill, allthough the swirly bit on the V needs a better connection to the rest of the green , that should be a very easy fix though.
Tempo. I like the fill. The middle bar of the E should have been higher more in the exactly middle, now it looks weird.
@Seder, good work man, you've come a long way since you started. Keep it up.
@Aeso, that's pretty fresh for a quick freestyle man!
@Tempo, The E looks awkward because the middle bar is too low, and it's too curvy in the wrong places. Your bar widths are all over the place, and your letters are spaced out too much and at inconsistent intervals. Also, your 3D is off, most noticeably on the E.
@sadgeh, looks like that took you about 10 minutes. I'd like to see a sketch that you took your time one. The letters are very square, throw some curves in there, especially in the E and the R. Also keep your bar widths consistent as well as the height and width of your letters.
@butters...really like the SCANK in general, has a nice flow to it and I just really like b&w. Though I have to agree with ribcage that the extension on the s is a bit to much. The extension going from the bottom C to the bottom s might have looked better if you would have let it come out of the C(sorry it's hard to explain what I mean in english). Really like the shape of that K, original(atleast to me it is). Your handstyle really needs some work though
@Aeso...nice pennage...nice handstyles asfar as I can see, I don't think I would have put that little extension thingy on left side of the A though.
@Rave...try and make your letters overlap...it will become more solid as a whole.
@Sadgeh Maak je letters wat breder, maakt het hele inkleuren ook wat makkelijker. Er zitten hier en daar wel wat leuke vormen tussen maar volgens mij loop je te ver op jezelf vooruit. Het is al moeilijk genoeg om simpele letters zonder extension er goed uit te laten zien. Ik hoop dat je hier iets aan hebt, zo niet...nou dan nietps. staat er nou "kanker of hoer"?
peace
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tell me your opinions.
^^^My opinion is upload the image here so i don't have to go there to look at it lol
erm personally quite like the shape of you letters myself reminds me a shyne but like at the beginning needs alot of work to pull of that style though,but hell why not try someones got to
Tempo-yeeesssssss!!! those fat letters look beaut!
Aeso- tight! nice and easy on the eyes noting out of place there
Danks- thats just fucking awesome mate i love the little guy and the 3d on the letters really looks like their being pulled back by a vacuum or something and the detail on the green mold on the letters...u just keep doing what your doing
Reach- never been around to comment but been looking at your sketches for a while...nice i likes!
Scank- like everything think the c is a little weird/ skinny but still likes it alot
atak-like it but it looks like its been chopped in half down the bottom of the page
sadgeh- slow down a little bit bud....generally i can make out the letters and some bits don't look bad but its a bit to extreme (like the last r) for me and like i keep telling tempo fatten your letters up abit
had a little play about with this from a song i heard while i was doodling sooo.......not quite so sure on the fill lol
dont flair the bars
lol saw some aesop tags near me
that fill is kinda space, or i have smoked to much weed.
But what markers should i use to get better fills, cause that ''kankerzooi of hoer'' sketch was kinda old, but my camera is broke and the scanmachine is also broke, fuck.
I've got "on the run twin markers".
example(not a very good one but oh well):
peace
Last edited by sernobil; 08-08-2011 at 09:04 PM.
^^^ i don't know sernobil that looks pretty fucking sweet to me! damn was looking at them on the run markers yesterday myself holy shit i'm guna have to go mug a granny or something because them colours are fresh as fook! i needs some of them pens
nah- u reckon lave it more blockbuster then??
sadgeh- lol, spaced, it could be
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Last edited by emace1; 08-09-2011 at 03:56 PM.
1st one sucks, second one sucks less, third one's letters suck even less, but the characs are dawp
Edit: Updated version. Crits?
Last edited by MN Nice; 08-09-2011 at 10:40 PM.
just messing around
i know im missing 3d and everything and Swae this is not my entry, this is just a fuck around
just checking if my signature shows up
MN Nice, work on your drop shadow a bit. It looks off in some places...and at the top of the S dont let the bar touch the middle of the S, cut it shorter. And Beastizm, that 3d is bad and shit blah blah you sound like you know haha. If that says Kasc your good, maybe fix the bar width (especially on the S) and the 3d. If it says Kast do that stuff + fix that fucking T. Good luck
yeah it says kasc, thanks for the crit
other shit is 2 big
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