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    Peter - like it more than the one before, lines can much cleaner and the handies are bad, but overall it looks good. Nice colours is it only paint or also markers or something

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    Quote Originally Posted by KehmONE View Post


    Shitty pic.
    Bottom page bump.

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    indeed the hadies are super bad... I was getting super lazy. I can paint over it and do it again. It's spray paint on canvas and the details are paint marker. My other one was brush with some pasty ass acrylic. I have a few others I am working on I'll post up soon. Thanks. As for you piece I like the direction you're going. I would drop the arrow on the bottom of the T and the way this flows I might make the o, r, e in a cursive fashion. The direction of the E looks promising to me but the execution needs some work keep working on it. It creates a big gap where the BS is. This is a close up of a really bad attempt to conveigh what I had in mind. I should have tilted the O and R to give it a little more cursive feel among otherthings. Keep it up. Name:  ore.jpg
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    @Beast> not a bad start. You're missing 3d on the top of the S, in the hole of the A, and the top of the K. Your 3d seems to change directions a bit too. Put a dot somewhere and use a ruler if you have to. Take your time with it and attention to detail. Keep it up.

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    Before and After


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    lol no comment or crits?

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    Shitty shit shit. I suck at graff again!
    Been a long time since I've sketched or even looked in these threads.
    Fuck You

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    cover bommb
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    hit up in my mini book
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    all crooked, and scrappy
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    exchange i did for the homie aokay

    My D is hella ugly here,
    these are all pretty old, camera broke, so no knew flicks(
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    @KEHM keep it simple for now. letters are jumbled and hard to make out at all with a bunch of extra nonsense that doesn't help.
    Last edited by PETER; 08-24-2011 at 11:08 AM.

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    old bs battle not sure if it polled
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Size:  25.0 KBfew 1 liners i was messin wit, kasc work on ur 3 d it sould be one solid piece echoing ur letters keep the width consistant

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    any crits?

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    It's not meant to be extremely legible. It says Invok btw.

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    heres the sketch and 2 other pieces i did yesterday Name:  IMGP2167.jpg
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    Quote Originally Posted by KehmONE View Post
    It's not meant to be extremely legible. It says Invok btw.
    which I understand. I'll say it, and it goes for Smack1 too, steer clear of any of the graffiti creator type letters. For one they suck ass to begin with and look like total shit if not done well. As with all graffiti webforums there is a "new to" page. Read it. it's gospel. I know it seems lame to write square ass letters, but for real you don't build a house from the roof down. Build your foundation and make it strong. Each repetition is a brick. This goes for handstyle, throws, the whole nine. Good luck and fill books!

    smack: the squared letters are a far better show. the 3d looks pretty good and proportions are good. If I do a piece like this I'll cheat and use a straight edge to make sure my lines are completly straight and my 3d is perfect. I suggest going lighter with your pencil. To the point it's almost hard to see. It erases easily and can play with structure and shape easily and even over the same letter with out ruining it and then just darken the parts you like. (and it wont leave huge lines in the sheets below like in the bottom left of your page)

    truth: not bad I like the C and E. Personally I would have bent the loop of the p down. The A needs work too. Practice the hell out of 3d. Not trying to be a dick, but the 3d on your E is completely fucked. http://www.artgraphica.net/free-art-...or-artists.htm http://www.khulsey.com/perspective-drawing-basics.html
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