it was the first one....
phone broke so webcaming it, makes it look like shit tho, those are the three graboids from the tremors movies
crits? anything to fix before color?
REZUME OR DIE:
1. get a camera or fix it or what ever
2. what markers were you using?
3. the first 2 R and E letters are ok the rest are wack because you did the letters going across the page like that also next time draw guidelines
4. draw guidelines then do simple block letters this help you get better at letter structure also BARS
5. love the characters and the dragon lol
bin it its wack
then draw block letters use a ruler if it helps but you need letter structure also another tip work on your lines
Last edited by xflare; 08-24-2011 at 04:59 PM.
the letters...there chopy and have alot of dead space dont be afraid to tuck ur letters behind the last like the top bar of ur e behind the s try thicker bars^^^^, i personaly am done postin pieces cause noone even acknoledges em
first colour piece i've done in while.
Last edited by aaesoo; 08-24-2011 at 06:27 PM. Reason: i'm retarded and didn't post the flick lol
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
cool good simple start trying to bend your bars a bit more because the e and s look a bit crooked and the top of the o is a bit wack but everythings great apart from that
and dont write esoe or esoes, and start simpler. its apparent you are working off some one elses style or letters. And you needa work on keeping your bars the same width, and the extensions on the s's are to big in my opinion
aeso= work your letters together its not a crime to overlap there just floatin around
humr- the r in the yellow one looks more like an a and the r in the light purple can be an e without the ex mark keep workin on it
give crits to get crits
Haha, it's funny because I went completely freestyle and used zero inspiration for the letters.
this my friends piece. he wanted me to put it up for him
crits would be appreciated
it says S.S.V.A
tell ur friend to start over I get a headache lookin at it. way too busy with no structure at all
kehm, well if your gunna try and rock a 5 letter word with only 3 different letters its gunna have to be clean as yell because all imperfections between letters will show.