Blackbooks

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ oh i'm so glad...i fucking love lush! he's my style of bansky, and thanks sema lol
and nah i'll bear that in mind the next time i do any penis related shit haha

[.Cuore]

uncolored, plan on coloring it somehow. looking for crits on cracks / ideas for extensions. my letter game is decent so I'm trying to delve into the process of learning extensions.

[sema]

same-no cracks, dont connect your letters, get a clean smooth line n structure before you try to overstep your means

[Tempo718]

ran out a space so

[Shroomsh]

Cant tell you guys enough, practice and self evaluation is the key, you are all pointing out each others mistakes whilst the piece you just posted have the same problems, if you can crit others you can crit yourselves. Proud to say all of you have great potential, just keep woking on letter structure, sit down with one word and adapt to the letter forms how they work with each other, the word shape as a whole ya dig?
Once you got how to teach yourself down, all you need is time and effort

[ATAK!:3]

some stuff ive been working on, crits?

[Beastizm]

my last fuck around sketch with this name, gonna start writing kasc, the word i chose for my battle wit swae

[sema]

^ shakey lines take ur time or try usin a roller point pen, i would also straiten the t out n extend the bottom hook of s to fill dead space the lean thros it off

[.Cuore]

bar width on the T is thicker on da top than on da bottom. and try making your E regular before adding bends etc

[Tempo718]

jus a few minor changes nothin special

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ fattening up is working in'it tempo not to sure on the two little joint lines on the t but the shape and the sort of sway of the letters looks well bud

[blameitonthewhiteboy95]

[Tempo718]

arse ur comment made me want to do some changes to the fill, i like it but what yall think good or bad.

finishing touches

[sema]

haha all of em look the same to me just diff lighting i dunno maby im goin blind

[Tempo718]

yo it was crazy how I was unable to take off that bottom one.. its on there wit some internet super glue or suttn lol but the 1st two there is a difference cause I had added some shaddow to tha one in the middle but thas all.

[ATAK!:3]

crits?

[ribcage]

uh theres someone on here who writes jest... He been gone for like a month tho...

[ATAK!:3]

really? i honestly just made it up on my own, oh well hope he doesnt care too much, but can i get some crits?

[Shit Outta Luck]

Jest, fix your tag haha. Try not to use arrows and make it more simple if you can. And I like that second sketch of yours the best, but that character makes it look like Jist instead of Jest.

[sadgeh]

wtf why is mine gone.

btw crits?