No problem!
No problem!
Originally Posted by Fluffy Bunnies
sadgeh - that looks sick
crits please
ewal 3d is off on w if thats wat you were goin for, i would just drop ll 3d strait back to left like a shadow do it like a roll out jam if ur gonna have it on a lean like that
@Sadgeh, sick man, lovin' it
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I LIKE THESE A LOT. MIND IF I USE THE A FROM THAT BLUE ONE TO TOY AROUND WITH?
and people wanna say you do this or that wrong.... Its fucking art there is no right or wrong way about it, does some stuff work better than others sure, and learning the basics is vital, but your opinion is just that yours. Suggest changes rather than pretending you have some rightous graffiti commandments in hand and trying to force someone to write the way you want.
Can i have some crits, please? With sick and loving it, i cant make further steps.
Last edited by sadgeh; 08-15-2011 at 11:46 AM. Reason: bottom page bump
Personally I would have gone uniform with the ribbion effect. Either changing width etc like the top of the T or completely the same witdth like much of the rest. Also if it where me I would work on the shape of the E. I think using something like the bit at the top left of the T on the end of the E going down would give it a good flow. diggind that rasta as well. I don't much care for seeing weed and such in graffiti unless it's a field of bad ass trees in a fx crew type mural. it just seems childish to me unless your are using it to make a statement for legalization or something. (just an opinion) My turn.
Can i have some crits, please? With sick and loving it, i cant make further steps.
My opinion is fact!!!!! Your graffiti will only be exceptd if you do exactly as I say!
then how am I doing? Pen and paper and paint on wood?
the top pic piece at top is actually pretty cool, if it was cleaned up a tad and way bigger in size id like it more. Your handies suck tho.
And I dont like the wood.
no need to crit the top piece, but crits on the bottom piece will be appreciated
Peter - im from holland, its allready legalized. But your toppiece looking good, maybe some 3d on. The purple thing is nice, make the lines cleaner.
Ewal - no crits, its simple, the 3d is nice with that colors.
Characters are from a 60s or 70s cartoon, Inki and the Minah Bird. Or something like that. Show was funny, the bird is fucking awesome.
lucky basterd! I was thinking a one point perspective in the center would give a nice shape. That was my first attempt at painting.... I am still learning the brushes and such I need to thin out the paint a lot more. It was going on like cake icing.
Last edited by PETER; 08-16-2011 at 08:34 AM.
panal sketch
Last edited by shadyloc420; 08-17-2011 at 02:41 AM.
peter- yeah i like all of that on this pageespecially the one above the painting
Sadgeh-nice, you need some blending pens tho, think the twists are a bit too much but i do likes it
s.o.l- nice but top of that is is a bit too short for my liking
ewal- the 2nd one shape of the letters reminds me of like wild west style writing don't know why lol, liking the 3d on the 1st one if not the colour
pointman- welcome hi, not seen you for a while lol
here's a random one i've just done....... kinda had the joined up letters idea in my head and just went for it
It does have a wild west feel to it. A wood grain fill with nails would be sick if you can pull it off.no need to crit the top piece, but crits on the bottom piece will be appreciated
another pen freestyle, because i dont own any colours atm.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
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