ya bro i'll hit you upOriginally Posted by ribcage
.......drunk highlighter freestyles......ima be doin em for a minute...
Tasty, dank, shrooms, exchange?
ya bro i'll hit you up
.......drunk highlighter freestyles......ima be doin em for a minute...
Tasty, dank, shrooms, exchange?
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
chunky
Last edited by ribcage; 08-20-2011 at 11:47 PM.
Humr - coming here and seein that kinda work bein put in is what inspires me.
Dank looks like ur piece is torn between having bends and being round
Ribcage im diggin those simples nice and clean
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-DVRQI8OjuV0/TueUYbPslRI/AAAAAAAAA3E/jutJ6vqNIgg/s640/tumblr_lkwssxFCh41qfbxavo1_400.gif
the fill in the chris piece is real nice. keep it up.
@ sinn nice flicks man first one is dopee
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fruit- if ur gonna do somethin on a curve like that give the letters some motion but work on structure more
sin- keep it up showin alota potential
amen- dig the style i like the m the a is alittle too big tho draws off the focal point
old sketch
Look alright to paint??
Last edited by pointman; 08-21-2011 at 05:10 PM.
all but the S, yes.
agreed
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pointman - that looks good, u should definitely paint that. and Im sorry if I sound stupid but who is that Char? ive seen it a million times but ive never known what it came from
id say fix the O a little bit too, could use a bit more funk on the bottom right.
that character is dope
its a mark bode char, he collabs wit graffiti artist from time to time and everybody uses his chars, i dont kno much about them but i kno theres the lizard and some orangey red guy with a wizard looking hat covering most of his body
Feel free to crit the fuck out of this. I'm having some trouble with more technical style.
oh ok, ive seen both the lizard and wizard guy a bunch of times, so its nice to finally know were they came from. thanks man
MN Nice - there is to much negative space between the M and U and the E and S. also if u flipped the M it would look better
crits please
lines aren't clean and whatnot but just want crits about letter structure and style, i think my N looks retarted but crit the hell out of it any advice would be appreciated
Ewal- i like it its pretty clean, would like to see it with a fill to add some flavor its plain, but like i said its clean so i like it
Mues- i think your E needs some work, it looks out of place to me with the rest of the letters i think its just cuz how theres not too much to it, but i really like the style, i would just keep at it
if rugby were easy it would be called soccer
i like the a and m but I'm not sure about that e if thats what it is
but yea the rest of the letters look good in my opinion
Last edited by SEKA24; 08-22-2011 at 02:31 AM.
knoxln that A is banggging.
As for the N, its pretty simple. But if you had those lines a little sharper i think it would look dope.
Maybe try to encorporate a wave in one of the legs or somthing similar to what you did with the A
Just my 2 cents, by no means am i "good" hah
yea bro i agree on the 'a' shit is fresh but the fat part coming off the middle of your 'e' is what looks wierd ,make that part skinnier to look like the rest of the letter
All those letters need work.
lines aren't clean and whatnot but just want crits about letter structure and style, i think my N looks retarted but crit the hell out of it any advice would be appreciated
mogan- your shits fire nothin i see that needs any crit
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