aeso= work your letters together its not a crime to overlap there just floatin around
humr- the r in the yellow one looks more like an a and the r in the light purple can be an e without the ex mark keep workin on it
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aeso= work your letters together its not a crime to overlap there just floatin around
humr- the r in the yellow one looks more like an a and the r in the light purple can be an e without the ex mark keep workin on it
give crits to get crits
Haha, it's funny because I went completely freestyle and used zero inspiration for the letters.
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this my friends piece. he wanted me to put it up for him
crits would be appreciated
it says S.S.V.A
tell ur friend to start over I get a headache lookin at it. way too busy with no structure at all
crits?
kehm, well if your gunna try and rock a 5 letter word with only 3 different letters its gunna have to be clean as yell because all imperfections between letters will show.
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u need to go waaaaay simpler . i can maybe see an s but other then that it hurts my eyes looking at it lolOriginally Posted by EWL24
this my friends piece. he wanted me to put it up for him
crits would be appreciated
it says S.S.V.A
COME ON any advice.
^^ya lose the arrow bits lose everything in purple work on structure alot more basicly go back to the drawlin board n go simpler its too busy with no direction
crits?
workin on simples cus i wanna get it correct. crits
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Last edited by Phat 2; 08-28-2011 at 05:13 AM.
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kasc id just try to make sure your bar lines up all the way up like on the second p, n i cant tell if thats 3d or 2d in the middle of the last n second one
burr
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2nd is 2d, last is 3d, this is unfinshed, yea i see the mistakes but thats why its in pencil, any crits
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crits ppl?
The S is tight, wish I could say the same about the rest... too many nonsense extensions and add-ons
suggestions and crits on this while i can still fix it? no idea what to do with the E was thinking since it stands out i could do the fill different from the rest
Jhiz. i havent been here in a while bro but honestly it looks like youve gotten worseburr
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