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    thanks for the tips pete, yeah after i was done and looked at the day after i thought the arrows shouldnt be there either, making it too complicated, AND they are both kinda facing the same direction without even lines

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    Quote Originally Posted by pez 1794 View Post
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    C looks horrible I know. Crits on these?
    Bumping this

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    pointman - i like it, the background kinda reminds me of puke though

    pez - the only good letter is the A in the middle, so make all the rest simple like that

    did this on some tree bark i got from my back yard , crits please
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    i dont even know

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    Positive and negative criticism is welcome and encouraged. Thanks!

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    that haste throw is hurtin. if it hadn't been for the hand in the corner i'd have thought it said krste.
    I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills

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    IMG_0043 by sirduke!, on Flickr

    charrrr

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    Quote Originally Posted by aaesoo View Post
    that haste throw is hurtin. if it hadn't been for the hand in the corner i'd have thought it said krste.
    Can you give me some advice, then? Thanks.

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    @livefree for the haste purple, the colours cool, just maybe dont flare out the right leg on the H and the A, and maybe not so high on the T, like aaesoo said it makes it look like krste

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    a couple handstyles i used to write in high school, still a little shaky but you get the idea, whats good/poop?

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    nickle: the second one is by far better than the first.... for several reasons. The top one has a lot of extra stuff that doesn't really work (kinda like the arrows in the throw). It changes between smooth and jagged letters which throws the flow off. I suggest making your K's more like the R's in the second one. The E in the second is pretty solid, but the first one feels forced. Jump in the toy handstyle battles.

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    ^ thanks man, yeah the scribe handie has always been my better one, less is more i guess and i just started trying to flare the bottom of the I like that i used to just throw a straight bar on the bottom, havent quite got it down yet, and i agree with the first one on how like the star looks wack AND the arrow is kinda goin no where hahah, but thanks for the crits boss, ill check the battle thread today
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    Quote Originally Posted by nickelbagger View Post
    this is my first little throwup sketch i guess, just a random word i wrote, whats good, whats bad

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    Did this during class. sorry for the fill, i happened to be using the world's shittiest marker.
    Crits and stuff?
    Btw i know the hand is puke i did it w/o thinking
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    atom: put some type of hole in the A, space out the T so it doesn't look like a lower case r and I'm not an %100 sure but i think ur shadows a little f@#ked up. it shouldn't show a shadow on both the top and bottom i think its suppose to be one or the other. u have it goin across the whole bottom but then u only have it on the top of ur T and O. get rid of that and leave the left and bottom sides

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    Thanks. I the shadow is seriously f'kdup. i'll try and keep a single vanishing point.

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    ^umm chrf? i think you've got a little too much going on there.

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    I think you just don't know how to look for letters when they're not completely obvious.

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    @saiko you just dont know how to read...



    edit* Lol! we said basically the same thing...
    Last edited by ribcage; 09-15-2011 at 04:31 PM. Reason: add some words

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    Quote Originally Posted by Norfsuthr View Post
    I think you just don't know how to look for letters when they're not completely obvious.
    By that i mean that your letters are unclear. I can read complicated pieces but that one is a bit odd.
    For example, the box seems like a c and the other letters are unclear. I'm not talking shit. Just trying to help. if you don't like it, fine i won't address you again.

    @ribcage can you read it?


 

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