@Sinn The first one is pretty good, i like the middle bottom S the best... the 2nd one is horrible i cant even read it... the 3rd one if pretty good, i like how the letters have little connections that kinda overlap the letters... if that makes any sence... I think if you slapped an outline on it and coloured in the 3d completely that would clean it up alot though.... the third one is alright, but i dont like how much random shit you have floating around your letters (the dots, the upside down cross, etc) or how it goes on a slant, that makes it harder to read the letters... I have no idea what kinda shit stain the 4th picture is trying to be... The 5th one is pretty cool, but just because its a toaster smoking crystal meth
@SomberBomber I like how you were practising your bars and straight lines on the 1st one, and you have some pretty dope letters in there, like the B and the R, but the A goes too thick in the bottom where it connects to the B, and some of the connections looks really forced... Plus on the L it really looks like you were trying too hard... I like the 2nd one alot, the S and R are fucking fresh, and nothing else really jumps out at me as especially bad, other than the colours... I like the 3rd one the least, the thickness is all over the place, some of your bars dont match up, the line that goes under the letters looks really forced, and theres tons of dead space... Dead space is what you do NOT want, no matter what....
@reach if i suck so much then stop paying so much attention to me. do your own thing, man.
*unfinished, still thinking if it's anything I should add something to it and which colors will be used.
Story: Basically, it describes how the women in my life I choose to accept within it seem's to be demolitionist when it comes to my heart.
Last edited by NW Pom; 09-18-2011 at 01:15 AM.
@Boar Since ya got so pissy I missed critin yours i like the lack of deadspace, but how much you pay Michael J Foxx to do that outline for you? I ain't seen somethin that shakey since muhhamad ali and WTF IS YOUR PROB WITH CRYSTAL METH? Battle me if you still hatin'. P.S. Post a pic if you wanna bitch.
...what the fuck? clearly your a 13 year old girl on her period since i just hurt your feelings so bad by giving you an honest crit... Just because I didnt start riding your cock and said I didnt like a couple of your peices doesnt mean I was hating... PS I said I liked the toaster because it was smoking crystal meth you dipshit
Heres some older simps, for talking
Last edited by Boar 1; 09-18-2011 at 09:09 AM.
Got a new blackbook the other day and thought I would put up something new. Crits are always welcome.
Forgot the rest.
me too, I especially like the fat little orange one
I'm nostalgic now.
u got the right idea but yeah somethings need to be tweaked, her shoulders leaden to her neck looks strange and her heads to small i think...girls r more curvy and less muscle toned right now it looks like she has dude pecks instead of tits lol
Sketch I did last night. Ignore the black coming in on part of the E, I started it and decided it looked horrible lol.
word switchblade. some nice letters.
this is the letter structure ive decided to stick with. please crit
I dont think you shouldve bent the bottom bar of the E that much, Eor. And Skeletor, lower the top part of that a. Its too far away lmao.
Last edited by Shit Outta Luck; 09-19-2011 at 05:42 PM.