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    Thanks for the input Vems. I'll play with the K a bit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Thanks for the input Vems. I'll play with the K a bit.
    np homie
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    Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.

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    Thanks for the crits bra
    Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
    The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.
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    rib - those are nice, i really like that P

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Thanks for the crits bra
    Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
    The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.
    The aply was a quick freestyle against mn nice, so the letters are kinda random, but yeah the P dont really fit the rest of the style.

    On the broke peice the R and K are practically the same, but it adds balance imo, I just should have made a curvier E.

    talk about balance... this the rough draft. gonna eat and go to work, prolly redo it tonight. no need to crit
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    trying something new but i think i gotta put the lower part of the s under the curve instead of in front...crits

    ribs: i definitely like the idea but I'm not feelin the H

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    sevr. doesnt reach do that e with his throws? and not really feeling the V kinda looks like a y, and for the drop shadow to make sense you need to fill in the hole in the r

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    maybe he does idk i thought it was just a generic e

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    take the nub out of the bottom of the v
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    Quote Originally Posted by EWL24 View Post
    rib - those are nice, i really like that P

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    I really like the bottom one bro, but maybe make the E a little more curvy like the W and L are... just my 2 pence
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    Reach - I really dig the loopy piece other then the curves on the H not sure whats off lookin forward to seein next draft ill have ur exchnge piece up at the end of the week local writers borrowing my book broke simple is fire
    Sevr- try and make it so theres no deadspace in your throw think fat stylish marshmellows
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spyder View Post
    Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.
    Every thing is good... except the letters. You are obviously a skilled artist, but your letters need work. For something like what you have there I think a clean script style would be more suitable. Keep working.

    Rib: that P does stick out in the Aply piece. I think if you stiffen up that A like the L and Y and use a different fill color for the P and make it stand out even more it would work better. One of my favorites from you. And with the swirly one I agree that the loops on the H are a little strange. Maybe a lowercase h would suit better, just make the right leg come up kinda high.

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    hey ribcage do me a kils. i dont have much to offer since i kinda suck, i dont wanna embarrass myself

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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
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    clean, raise the center hole in the a a bit, and possibly remove/choose a better color for the lines inside the letters, like a different/lighter shade of purple, or a bright solid white. other than that looking clean man. nice fade/blend
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    Quote Originally Posted by vems View Post
    clean, raise the center hole in the a a bit, and possibly remove/choose a better color for the lines inside the letters, like a different/lighter shade of purple, or a bright solid white. other than that looking clean man. nice fade/blend
    thanks man. should have kept them the same height. The lines inside are silver, doesn't really show... just working with what I got.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fluffy Bunnies View Post
    hey ribcage do me a kils. i dont have much to offer since i kinda suck, i dont wanna embarrass myself
    im not a machine man, I got like 4 internet exchanges, 3 real exchanges, and a battle with ankr to do. If your on tonight around 10 or 11 I prolly be on lookin for some simp battles/exchanges or somethin

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    can you like do some "fuck Phat2" tags on every one of these exchanges and battles you're planning on doing dude? that'd be cool thanks


 

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