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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Every thing is good... except the letters. You are obviously a skilled artist, but your letters need work. For something like what you have there I think a clean script style would be more suitable. Keep working.
    Thanks. I'm finishing up another one right now with Blockish letters. Only 1 character this time too.

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    I really llike that gass mask guy... BUT you really need to work on the letters and make them clear and big enough to read because like only half is readable...

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    hey guys, new here but tell me what you think of this piece i did today Name:  OKUN.jpg
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    itizle: you look like your trying way too hard. do some simps and work on letter structure. likin the characters though just could be a bit cleaner.
    I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills

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    Name:  102_1653.jpg
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    heres a sticker

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    meh. M and U are dece but the E and S just kill it.


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    Geza- i like that alot and the colors are dope. could be a bit cleaner but still sick. especially for a sticker
    Mues- that throw isnt bad but i would take out some of the indents on the M. everything else i like

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    Name:  img003.jpg
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    Well crits please!

    And I know the char isn't original, so no need telling me ok thanks (edit)
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    work on cleaner lines,
    but wheres the char do you mean the smiley face?
    ill just say your tags nice
    Last edited by theking; 09-26-2011 at 06:16 PM.
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    this *****, stealin characters from his little sister and shit.

    @geza shits cool

    @ace-k that U you think is decent, is not decent.

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    tried a simp crits please i want somone to be harsh an let me know what i should work on.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MyNipsAreHard View Post
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    still looking for crits
    Shush- you really need to clean up your lines and dont be afraid to change up your bar width
    Kost- work on more simple styles and you will develop better style.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MyNipsAreHard View Post
    Shush- you really need to clean up your lines and dont be afraid to change up your bar width
    Thanks will do... "H" is kind of boring to work with.
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    yeah i really dont like L's very much either. i write BLOCK so its not great ahha
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    Quote Originally Posted by shush4 View Post
    Thanks will do... "H" is kind of boring to work with.
    check out some ish by heist solid h's

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    Maaaaan H's are steazy, if you cant do an H, then ya cant do an N or an A

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    Well, if you all were big graff heads like you go on like, you would know that the smiley face is used by a well known graff artist... Do you homework people... And TheKing I've only been sketching for a few weeks bro, and thanks for the crits people, I'll work on my lines thanks alot
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    Is there a forum about bars and letter structure?

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    There is a simps topic in the toy forum mate
    Anything I say or post on this website is a LIE I don't commit Vandalism and will never agree with Vandalism, Art however is a different story

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    Thanks lad


 

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