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    @Astok - I'm diggin it.

    @Nips - What aeso said

    @Kasc - too much negative space between your L and I

    @SOL - top one is aight, could use some work. Bottom one, thicken up your lines and work on cleaning up your char's


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    ^...what you doin there dude? You got a bunch of mismatched letters. M doesnt match anything, S doesnt match anything, U E match, but the U is awful.

    @shroomsh lookin good bro, you need to flare out that right part of K out a little and kill any negatvie space created with shadow, cause I thought it read astox for a second, The K is a good X



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    Thats my biggest problem right now, trying to stick to a font theme. I'm working on something else though, I'll have the outline done tonight

    See, ruined this one with inconsistent font. Fuck it.

    Last edited by MN Nice; 09-28-2011 at 12:36 AM.

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    dude, your working with pencil, erase what doesnt match and fix it
    Last edited by ribcage; 09-28-2011 at 02:07 AM.

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    lookin for some crits on these:


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    Here's my updated one


    and a close up of the graffman


    New crits?

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    I dig it, next sketch you do you should thicken up your outline a bit, make your shit a little bolder it will look better.

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    Last edited by Phat 2; 09-28-2011 at 07:36 AM.

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    Rolling Kush-- the second two pieces are dope. the AMS isnt nearly as good as the other two. im not really diggin the heart shaped thing at the end of the M
    Spyder-- deffinitely thickin lines like ribcage said
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    Spyder - Like those two said. And your 3D is very sloppy, especially those lines. E isen't flowin well, i would fatten the lowest bar. The whole piece could be cleaner, but diggin it overall, letters are kind of nice, its got potential. keep it on man.

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    kush- dope sauce on that last peice.
    mn nice- solid simples.

    been MIA from here for a bit, you havent missed much...but what you have:








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    day home from school Please crit:



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    Shush- i like that bottom piece but i would forgot about the designs on the top ones till you get some good letter structures
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    seriously dont know what i was thinking when i drew the character
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    are you in israel or some shit? why the fuck do you get a whole week off for a jewish holiday.

    and crits:
    Shush - work on keeping all your letters the same size. draw horizontal lines across the page if you need to. cause especially on the bottom piece it really throws the whole thing off when the letters are changing sizes.
    Fokes - other dude was right the top piece could use some work but that bottom one is the shit.
    block - there's a lot going on and the letter structure could use some work. especially that c.
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    here is a throwback peice i did, says "SEK" was the first word i ever wrote n got arrested writing, so i felt like doing something with it again, besides the weak color combo, lmk what yall think. any and all crits are welcome.

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    not sure where i should post so ill start at the bottom, crits please

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    heres some more work that i could find, please crit, advice is always welcome, some of these are older than others btw. thanks

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    This is a shot at a detailed throw that turned into a piece-of-shit simple.
    Can i get some crits on how to make it a simple

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    give up, stop attempting to write


 

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