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    @Saiko

    i learned simples from doing keybaord letters, simply draw the letters on your key board. figure out sizing, and spacing and there's your simples.

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    Souloner- you got some dope pieces but id say work on letters and structure rather then complex color schemes. get dope letters. its hard to do complex colors schemes with markers anyway
    saiko- what soul^^^ said
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    Thanks,Soul & block
    @block it'd look better if the letters were even. And maybe drop that extention on the staff of the k Also that indent on the o should point to the right. Not really feeling that c either

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    @Block,

    ty man, ill work on some more letters, and for yours its pretty much like what saiko said the "L" looks awkward when its so small,

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    soul, dope pieces. Heres what i try and keep in mind. even though im still a toy and JUST gettign in to straight letters and what have you, before any extentions what so ever you should aim to have super dope and crazy letters. Then from there you can add all the fancy stuff. w/ that style im wondering where youre from?
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    @ shush,

    ty, im working on letters as we speak actually and im from eastern Canada why do you ask?

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    IMG_0056 by sirduke!, on Flickr

    crits please

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    Quote Originally Posted by emace1 View Post

    IMG_0056 by sirduke!, on Flickr

    crits please
    I'm no expert but your letter structure looks ok, only think i have to say is you should make sure all of the important parts of each letter are showing for example the o is blocking part of the m where it would show to be an m. im not sure if that makes much sense over the internet.
    in any event, heres my latest, took my last crit into consideration. what can i improve on now?
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    Shush- your lines are still a little shaky- try doing the letter in a less amount of lines. limiting the connecting points where the mistakes/sloppyness occurs
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    Quote Originally Posted by MyNipsAreHard View Post
    Shush- your lines are still a little shaky- try doing the letter in a less amount of lines. limiting the connecting points where the mistakes/sloppyness occurs
    anything else i should work on? does it seem my letter structure is headed in the correct direction?
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    shush,

    you could try doing your letters in pencil first it makes them easier to go over in marker it will help with the lines a bit.

    also if you want help with letter structure, idk where you started but what you should do when making simples is to make sure your bars are even width. theres a few spots where your bars are being squeezed or expanded
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    Quote Originally Posted by souloner View Post
    shush,

    you could try doing your letters in pencil first it makes them easier to go over in marker it will help with the lines a bit.
    for some odd reason my letters dont come out as good lol
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    If you're using bars and pencil they will come out better, trust me. also, at least in the early stages, try to keep all the letters straight if youre doing a straight. keep them as simple and consistent as possible.

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    u gotta do ur curved lines in one solid motion, u can tell u stop every little bit to re adjust ur hand/paper and especially with a marker it never lines up perfect once u stop..get that down and it should make ur shit look a lot better

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    @ shush,
    then you can use a fine tip first then use a larger sharpie (just assuming that's what you use) and go over it, try not to lift the marker to much or leave it in one spot especially corners cuz they tend to bleed and then you get dots on ever corner lol

    i use pencil, then a fine tip, erase the pencil and then use a larger tip and do just the outside lines see my b/w piece to see what i mean lol

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    also shush if your going to do 3D fill it in. dont leave it white
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    anyone wanna give me anymore crits on mine?

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    Quote Originally Posted by emace1 View Post
    anyone wanna give me anymore crits on mine?
    you shouldnt disregard what i said. its actually rather important
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    this lookd alright until i aded the blue


 

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