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    Quote Originally Posted by sane. View Post
    gimme a better word?
    butseks! seriously though.... do you have any nicknames?

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    just dont write sane lol maybe change the letter combo around and keep same letters who knows just maybe next time research the name if its a big known artist stay clear if not who cares unless ur from the same place

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    some pieces i did on my boards. crit it up
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    Heyyyy, finally another person on this forum that skates. What deck you riding right now man? But for crits, the top kook is pretty good, the top right of the k's shouldn't get thin where it connects to the leg. And i'm diggin that KOTR, but thicken up the bottom of your T to match the rest of the letters. otherwise it looks like you have a decent understanding of letters.

    Another one I finished today. Self crits - the left loop of my M is too small and my background is fucked.


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    MUES- thanks dude- but right now im riding daryl angel habitat. just got it today actually. because of the broken deck above. haha. but your deffinitely getting betting. your self crits are pretty accurate and overall pretty good piece. not diggin the background so much tho
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    For the most part these arent in any real order... and the only ones that dont say ZETA are ROBOBANG (under the beaver), Hold (to the right), COMP (under robobang) and HOLD (to the right of that)

    any crits would be nice. i have 3 posts of pics so any crits on any of the various pics and styles would be appreciated

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    For the most part these arent in any real order... and the only ones that dont say ZETA are ROBOBANG (under the beaver), Hold (to the right), COMP (under robobang) and HOLD (to the right of that)

    any crits would be nice. i have 3 posts of pics so any crits on any of the various pics and styles would be appreciated

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    wtf man whyd u cover her tits?
    STAYBACK.

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    You should really know things like that before you make these decisions.

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    haha sorry man. other than that, what do you think?
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    i paint when i can afford paint, pretty much impossible racking paint in adelaide, but i agree theres soo many toys in adelaide, but there are a few that are right up there

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    tried goin simple with a weird background lmk what ya think, crits

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    zeta... you've got some really interesting style up there. weird ones I'd like to see on wall, but the more "traditional" style ones you rockin are lackin.
    I'd have given you a big chunk of crit text. but I'm gonna let someone else with more patience do it

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    Sever - i like it, but i think u should have submerged the letters a little more

    did this back in June but i finally colored it in crits please
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    love the character, badass classic movie...make his hands bigger though, looks like he has little girl hands lol and shade the bat so it looks round cuz it looks like a flat cricket bat/stick thing the way u colored it...good shit though

    i didn't wanna put em to low cuz the S might look like a C and the E would look like an F...idk maybe ill try it next time

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shroomsh View Post
    i paint when i can afford paint, pretty much impossible racking paint in adelaide, but i agree theres soo many toys in adelaide, but there are a few that are right up there
    yeah same sitcho with paint for myself hence why i usually use some cheap shit for fills so i can get more done for less price

    i know a range of all styles and shit gotta say theres a bunch of burners from adelaide over the years

    hit me a pm if u use fb man theres a group on there with a mad range of adelaide flicks always being posted

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    do you mean that the traditional ones are lacking? and why? if not you answering, itd be cool if anyone did. and i like the other style thats robotic. ill try and paint that soon.
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    Zeta: That "Robot" style is sick as fuck! I agree with Phat that your traditional style is not nearly on par with most of your other work. Seems you're trying to go very abstract with the letter forms and are starting to lose some of the foundation that give the letters clearity and strength. The reason the robot forms work so well is they still stick pretty close to a traditional letter form that has been made abstract. Your artistic abilities are undenyable. I suggest toning down the abstract for your "bubble" type letters to get more of a foundation of before aplying your abstract mind to them. For instance the green one that is upside down under the naked lady that that kid was upset about her tits being coverd. This one shows a stronger foundation than most of the others like it. The style you use in the one that says Sir with the hand print is very cool. Some of the other ones like this look great, but lose legibility. I think with some more practice you could rock this style hard as fuck.

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    thanks alot man. i like the legit critique. ive been coming to the site for a while and obviouslt managed to get in a ton of work before i ever posted. those are only the ones i wanted to post, i have alot more that are way more toy but ya know everyone has a toy phase. im still in it but hopefully youre comments will help me get out of it. and for me legibility isnt a huge concern. some of them are a bit ridiculous though. anyway, thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Heyyyy, finally another person on this forum that skates. What deck you riding right now man? But for crits, the top kook is pretty good, the top right of the k's shouldn't get thin where it connects to the leg. And i'm diggin that KOTR, but thicken up the bottom of your T to match the rest of the letters. otherwise it looks like you have a decent understanding of letters.

    Another one I finished today. Self crits - the left loop of my M is too small and my background is fucked.

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