make the P bigger and it's sweet
make the P bigger and it's sweet
Don't get me wrong mate, I know how to fucking paint. I don't fucking paint the trains that they're saying I did mate, and if they want to fucking charge me for trains, i'll go out and fucking paint some fucking trains, fucking fucking trains, trains trains trains. - Jisoe
for sure make the P bigger lookin' good toops
yeah some minor things to change but else it seems good
hoping to go paint it soon but when theres only 1-2 legal places in ur city its hard
I look forward to seeing it done.
yeah cant wait to paint it gonna try get a couple mates and do smth togetherOriginally Posted by PETER
oh my god...anyway just made my first draw in my new blackbook. cant find my camera D:
EDIT: Found it :3
Last edited by "FrY"; 09-24-2011 at 01:22 PM.
I'm not graffiti-ing. I'm just tattooing the walls...
needs to have more letter structure
A friend asked me to write her name. Crits?
more letter formaciiioon un even lines, and your so not ready for extencions
@reach LMFAO
Last edited by Phat 2; 09-24-2011 at 03:35 PM.
dam jacob your shit gets better as i went down lol
Last edited by vems; 09-24-2011 at 03:48 PM.
VEMSONE
This is REALLY toy but I want to know what to improve on. So hit me hard on improvements
ummmmm everything lol
don't worry bout putting sharp edges on every corner...GO SIMPLE, ur D is kinda simple but take away those pointy edges, do waaaaaaaaaay more of a simpler Y and the E is fine put same thing with the edges. do keyboard letters an add a shadow/3D but focus on ur letter structure before u start adding all the background bullshit
Nice little draw i did in about 10 minutes
I'm not graffiti-ing. I'm just tattooing the walls...
dope ass page for a toy black book (for the most part)... reker I like that shit... and that guy with the random characters
http://signup.leagueoflegends.com/?ref=4f8f91b2e3b4c682128764
that last post made me look at your previous one again... and sure enough, I noticed the weaknesses.
better think again, jacob. you got potential, but you've got some stuff that's really hurtin. look out
I did like that Kids Th@t Over Cum page though. Pleasing to the eyes haha
tried simple heres what i got:
i dont think it flows well so i gotta work on it. What i like is my 1st S and my U i think the 2nd S is ok and H's i'm having a hard time conquering but i'm sure with work i'll get it.
Keep doing that ^ Over and over and over and over and over and over again. Do it so damn much that letter bar widths will naturally be the same size throughout. Gradually add on extensions and bends. You're doing the right thing.
But the last H is bunk. Not that many bends in one bar.
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