i'm diggin the T, define the arch in your M more and thin out your S a bit. besides that it's pretty fresh.Originally Posted by MyNipsAreHard
i'm diggin the T, define the arch in your M more and thin out your S a bit. besides that it's pretty fresh.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
reposting for crits
.... And Boom Goes The Dynamite
@Astok - I'm diggin it.
@Nips - What aeso said
@Kasc - too much negative space between your L and I
@SOL - top one is aight, could use some work. Bottom one, thicken up your lines and work on cleaning up your char's
^...what you doin there dude? You got a bunch of mismatched letters. M doesnt match anything, S doesnt match anything, U E match, but the U is awful.
@shroomsh lookin good bro, you need to flare out that right part of K out a little and kill any negatvie space created with shadow, cause I thought it read astox for a second, The K is a good X
Thats my biggest problem right now, trying to stick to a font theme. I'm working on something else though, I'll have the outline done tonight
See, ruined this one with inconsistent font. Fuck it.
Last edited by MN Nice; 09-27-2011 at 11:36 PM.
dude, your working with pencil, erase what doesnt match and fix it
Last edited by ribcage; 09-28-2011 at 01:07 AM.
lookin for some crits on these:
Here's my updated one
and a close up of the graffman
New crits?
I dig it, next sketch you do you should thicken up your outline a bit, make your shit a little bolder it will look better.
Last edited by Phat 2; 09-28-2011 at 06:36 AM.
Rolling Kush-- the second two pieces are dope. the AMS isnt nearly as good as the other two. im not really diggin the heart shaped thing at the end of the M
Spyder-- deffinitely thickin lines like ribcage said
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SantaIsReal
Eat poop all day
Spyder - Like those two said. And your 3D is very sloppy, especially those lines. E isen't flowin well, i would fatten the lowest bar. The whole piece could be cleaner, but diggin it overall, letters are kind of nice, its got potential. keep it on man.
kush- dope sauce on that last peice.
mn nice- solid simples.
been MIA from here for a bit, you havent missed much...but what you have:
from oldest to newest, criitsss.
funny shit.
day home from school Please crit:
Shush- i like that bottom piece but i would forgot about the designs on the top ones till you get some good letter structures
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SantaIsReal
Eat poop all day
seriously dont know what i was thinking when i drew the character
++++++SIR CREW++++++ sircrewgraffiti.blogspot.com
SantaIsReal
Eat poop all day
are you in israel or some shit? why the fuck do you get a whole week off for a jewish holiday.
and crits:
Shush - work on keeping all your letters the same size. draw horizontal lines across the page if you need to. cause especially on the bottom piece it really throws the whole thing off when the letters are changing sizes.
Fokes - other dude was right the top piece could use some work but that bottom one is the shit.
block - there's a lot going on and the letter structure could use some work. especially that c.
Last edited by aaesoo; 09-28-2011 at 03:41 PM.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
here is a throwback peice i did, says "SEK" was the first word i ever wrote n got arrested writing, so i felt like doing something with it again, besides the weak color combo, lmk what yall think. any and all crits are welcome.
VEMSONE
not sure where i should post so ill start at the bottom, crits please
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