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    colors - ha that is a character nice addition i was thinkin of ninja in this one i ono yet
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    Tempo - Cheers man. Next version will be up later today. As for yours (the piece at the end of the previous page): good, solid structure, my only criticism is the conjoined M and the 4th letter of the piece. Looks out of place compared to the rest of it. I'd say either keep all the letters separated or have them all conjoined.

    Thotz - That's fresh man, I can't really fault it. Nice fill, background and composition. Nice one.

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    thanks man. the picture doesnt really tell it like it is. that tannish looking color is cinnamon toast. looks doper in real life.

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    @thotz, man i hate T's... i think you made them work well with the piece though
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    @thotz; regardless of what the last posts have said about your style, it's not good. you are trying too hard to achieve something that you will never get to until you have learned proper letter structure. so before going all crazy like that start of simple, and see where that gets you. then gradually build onto your style, and you will get better and better.
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    @ Zeta ya im having a little difficulty with my T's as well. but i appreciate the crit.
    @ Tasty. What do you mean simple? For one there was nothing technical about the DRZ piece. Pretty simple lettering with a little flare, do yoj not agree?

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    These are on the school's desk so maybe it's not really well done !

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    crook i like the second piece the most, but the top of the R looks a little weird, you should just cut off the curved part of the R at the same height as the left side of the R. Id say thats a pretty good simple to start with, of course just clean it up a little more and keep the bars pretty consitent and your golden. Also, get rid of that little thing on top of the K.
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    thotz - sorry but i agree with tasty, and that DRZ piece is not simple at all there is way to much extensions. also i thought i would let u know that ur Lee Quińones quote is wrong,
    what Lee really says is "Graffiti is a Art and if Art is a crime, let God forgive all"

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    actually, he says Graffiti is art and if art is a crime, please god, forgive me. get ur shit straight youngen.

    i like it Colors. simple and to the point.
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    haha maybe next piece

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    bored. abstract thotz.
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    Colors - i like the two bottom ones there good, but the top ones kinda wierd the N looks cool though

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    actually, he says Graffiti is art and if art is a crime, please god, forgive me. get ur shit straight youngen.
    my shit is straight, thats Fab 5 Freddy standing in front of Lee's Howard the Duck mural and look what the quote says
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    Quote Originally Posted by thotz.one View Post
    @ Tasty. What do you mean simple? For one there was nothing technical about the DRZ piece. Pretty simple lettering with a little flare, do yoj not agree?
    i dont agree at all, you spammed the shit out of the pice with connections and extensions, and the placing of them does not compliment the piece at all. i literally mean simpler, as in go down to keyboard letters.
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    thats not what he actually says. he changed specifically for that tag. look it up, he says exactly what i have written.

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    no comment on tha whole quote thing but not for nothin ewl right.
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    @tempo, whats with the J and the ipod plug...?piece is alright though. I dont really like the top of the first E, and is there a letter after the second M? But other than thats its pretty nice and good color choice
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    yeah the 2nd M and O are sharing the same bar. I feel you on the E cause I'm planning on commin back and doin that over.
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