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WONDERFUL
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WONDERFUL
you fucked up most notably on the right part of the hand and fingers, the thumb doesnt look Bad, but it sure isnt good.
look at your hand, i really hope it didnt look like what you drew.
and ur self crits suck.
Knoledge, thats fuckin dope
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
know - that is really sick
bump for crits
i like SneeZ more just because it looks alot better and not like sh!t... yeeee diggg? and those self crits you gave your self are the one's iwould have givin you
Yo Thotz, you remind me of a cat that was around here a year or two ago.
He was just as fucking delusional as you were, but he eventually got with the program.
Your head is too big, homie. I'm assuming you live in the burbs, been painting.... no, sketching for well under a year.
Not a single spot hit, you don't know shit.
and sneez, I can start by saying that the index finger has no knuckle
Know, you should fill that shit
walter... i like it... but the L just was squished in. and im not diging the face in the U but thats just me... and welcome to BS.com lol
I smoke Vega
Walter - i think u have to many random extensions
Lizard - i like that, but i think it would look better with an outline and with the T straight
can i get some crits on my post now
Ewal- top of the E is too long, left bar on the W is a lil wonky at bottom. And that right bar on the A is really weak, fatten it up, keep your bars consistent.
Tempo- do what Ewal and Lizard is doin, hella simples, you are bending ur bars too much too fast and adding weird fuckim shit. Its better then some stuff before though so ups on that...
Lizard- that I is a floating away but other then that ita dope
dankbudz your crit sucks too. Didint do any good.
and its hard to draw bigger than natural/actual. Thats why i fucked up, but at least im tryin.
And here is my hand studies from last friday. give me crit on ones that ain't bad. and its big, format A0.
probably cause yo bitch ass doesnt know the difference between right and left..
shadow on the d needs some tlc and thicken up the !. All in all not a bad show. just noticed the shadow on the dot is going the wrong direction too. I like how you did the top portion of the E and feel the bottom should be a mirror of it. knock out some more.
@know, REALLY clean. love it. the face looks kinda flat though..
@dank, eh the letters are reeeal simple and theyre kinda far apart, but i dig the colors and other than that bit above the D the shadow is correct. usually people mess that up
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Thot's, you need to even out your bars. Your structure is off. Do more simps.
Guy's.. He didn't mess up that hand. He just copied the man with the fucked up hand off of Scary Movie 2. Duh....
Original style. Not feeling the V on top of the T's, H is bad and that connect to the O needs work to look right. Cool Z though. Keep doing simples like that, youll get it.
thanks for the crit man. that exactly what im shooting for is originality obviously with key graffiti elements. im looking around this forum, and with the exeception of a few, EVERYBODYS shit looks the same. fuck that.
same pic just added lines, which one do u like better and some crits please
Yeah Maybe I'll Get Some Fucking Crits Please.
I Was Rockin Snap Backs Before Mac Miller Did.
Yes, yes it definitely needs more arrows. But only if they all go in the same direction and come out of nowhere.
Scrape off the arrows so we can see the letters and we'll talk.
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