The Sketch, and the final.
I accidently'd the bottom part of the E. That's what I get for half way paying attention to the piece, then half listening to the teacher. Fuck it.
The Sketch, and the final.
I accidently'd the bottom part of the E. That's what I get for half way paying attention to the piece, then half listening to the teacher. Fuck it.
finally did something i somewhat like..watcha all think?
--Art is A weapon--
crits
aiaw: i think i cant look at that, because it makes me wanna smack a child. go more simple, no extensions, no overlapping letters, no colours, no arrows, no random shit. just do keyboard letters and nothing else, thatll get you somewhere
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
hey skina I like that. U down for an exchange bro..
I smoke Vega
im down i guess
tempo sounds like the ultimate faggot.
skina- yo lose those arrows you have and even out some of those bars, it has a bit too many angles n shit, but its not too bad, just clean it upp
Last edited by dankbudz; 11-04-2011 at 12:28 AM.
cant do right by some1 who cant do wrong so what u got to say next fool
I smoke Vega
feedback?
I smoke Vega
Bump. Crit it jews.The Sketch, and the final.
I accidently'd the bottom part of the E. That's what I get for half way paying attention to the piece, then half listening to the teacher. Fuck it.
Skina: IMO Good. I would lose the arrows. I would make sure to keep that top bend on all of your letters on the same level. That way it looks cleaner. It might be just me, but it seems to be a little off.
synone: that canvas panel is decent. Your E is hidding too much imo and part of it is missing all together. Not a bad show all in all.
I know part of it's missing. I colored it in on accident lol.
I like these, consistent n clean.. as for crits, you have a couple of awkward bars on the kew, but the letter structure/shape is good. My suggestion is to work on the where the bars diverge and meet (for example the bottom of the 'w') so that the flow isnt disrupted nahmean?.. keep at it, youre progressing dun!The Sketch, and the final.
I accidently'd the bottom part of the E. That's what I get for half way paying attention to the piece, then half listening to the teacher. Fuck it.
Anybody remember me?
fuck ya
looking for input on structure
normally don't fuck with arrows but trying to fill some negative space
stick with the E from the top one and I'm not feeling the arrow from the inside of the U. Aside from that it looks good. I suggest maybe pulling the arrow at the top of the U in a bit tighter and see how that looks.
kuts.......the k proportions r fucked
i do! everyone thought you were biting Zewl and RewtAnybody remember me?
That T doesnt work well, lose the extens on the N and the E doesnt seem to fit, some 3D is off as well, looks cool though
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