shouldnt have colored... but heres another.
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it's done
I don't see why this is in toy thread. Super clean man. Mad propsOriginally Posted by Jiska Matos
it's done
you realy think Mori?
Id say intermediate man.too fresh for this page
thats what I was thinkin.. but i suck hah. ur shits tight man
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Jiska, your letters are not intermediate yet. Your skill is great, compostion and color Id give a B+ the colors you chose are ill and the 3d is bangin. But as for intermediate thread worthy, id say your letters still have a little way to go
a couplee thing i drew up today. i need a lot of work:\
see.. im still at the point I cant even tell how advanced the letters are. all I know is if I can read them or not and if they flow good. but ya I do kno the colors are siicck
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Second that. You still gotta give credit on the background and charo. You don't see that often in this thread. Keep it up chief
dont know if you alredy know this one but give me you crits on this Rib...
oh yeah no doubt, the piece is visually pleasing the way the colors make it jump off the page. No doubt a ton of skill was used to make it that way. once his letters come togethor he'll be turnin heads.
@jiska you should really start thickening up your outline. make the lines a little bolder and the outline will look really crisp. As for the letters, their on the right track, but have a kind of weird look to them because of the extensions and weird bar widths.
Starting with the S, that extension that comes out from underneath the middle bar that connects to E is weird, and the letters would look better without it. The E is extremely top heavy. The R's left most bar gets really skinny at the bottom and kind of throws off that letter. If you would have made it the same width at the bottom, but made the shape the same just a little more squared off it would make the R more solid. The I is hidden, and the crossing bar of the A is a little too small imo. The L would look fine without the connection to A. Id say do without all those arrows too, cause most are coming out of nowhere...
I really say put the emphasis on making your outlines boulder though, cause it would really accentuate your style. that moon character is dope btw
agreed about the S-->E extention, but the illustration on the characters is quality man I dig it.
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thks guys...i see my chars r more advanced then my letters :P
word your characters are sic and your lines are super clean def alot of potential there
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Id like to see what you can make if you really stick to some simple bars. I feel like you could really get down if you eliminate some lesser m aspects of your pieces
critic is needed and accepted
just something i did at work today
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