Blackbooks

[Simon]

thinking of making this into a wildstyle piece but just wondering how are the letters atm? Attachment 40755

well first time doing Wildstyle, could be better, the arrows are pretty crap. crits please

[Phat 2]

everything is pretty crap. and this is nothing close to even being joked about being called a wildstyle. letters, arows, bars, flow, structure. the only thing you have down is basic pen/marker usage. you gotta get used to the very basics of letter structure and bar consistency before even thinking of attempting to add style to your letters.
trust me I'm not hating. take it or leave it
and wtf is up with all these arrows you tryin to make kristy a noodle soup piece....... or something?

[MN Nice]

naked gees collab. no space for the d on naked
Attachment 40676

Bump. Take notes kids

[Colors]

Bored in class
p.s. its toy month wooooh

[-Sinn-]

Kirsty- Needs more arrows
Playg I wanna see it when its done looks good so far and has alot goin for it
Reach- just got it back today:






Crits?

[Tempo718]

your colors are bugged out but I could tell u was goin twords that on purpose

[DRZ]

fresh ass reach exchange.

[centrysam]

Untitled by grinder13, on Flickr

[snal]

from today,vere boring day...give me crits if you're in the mood will preciate

[SynOne]

Sam - Toooo many pointless extensions in that. That U doesn't even look like a U because of all that in the middle of the letter. That random extension on the R, right in the middle of it's right leg and the loop in it throws it off bad. Almost causing it to not look like an R.

[centrysam]

thanks for the crits ill work on that

[MN Nice]

Bump that Reach exchange!

[SynOne]

Some stuff I done did do.

[Tempo718]

[Colors]

Tempo do you write tempo

[Tempo718]

yeah an sauna 2

edit:not sauna 2 "sauna" too

[Colors]

I don't know why but when I got bored earlier I sktched a quick tempo simple, and I figured ill post it on here and you could just sketch a simple based off of mine. Its a quick one so its not too greaT but hey just an idea, thought I could help you out

[SkateJunt]

for the labour throwie battle this week. critz appreciated

labor throwie battle by SkateJunt, on Flickr

[DRZ]

skatejunt - it makes my eyes hurt. should have just filled it in completely. it looks like doodoo the way it is.

[smack1one]

crits?