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    As my exchange wasn't the best either. Nor am I good. At this point... This thread still makes me want to punch myself in the face.

    Colors - That left leg on that N needs fixing. I wouldn't bend it that way. I would keep it straight. It seems to mess the entire letter. Your A and K are the best letters. The bottom of your E is all fucked. The D looks like an O you need to straighten out the left side of it.
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    tempo that reach is fire bro
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    and yeah they do overlap too much also. just keep them the same size(the letters and bars) and GO SIMPLE hah

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    keep doin what your doing is what tempo is reading from what anyone who crits his work says
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    ^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.

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    true, my bad im high and ramblin.
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    hahahaha truth hipe

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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
    ^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.
    lol word me too
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    Tempo. You need to keep that shit simple or there's ganna be no improvement. O and yes use letter structure

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    this is the first time i have ever do something like this

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Size:  170.8 KB first an old simp from a long while ago, and then second ones basic outline for what im gna paint later, whats ya think?
    hold ya can up n stand up

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    other way round*
    hold ya can up n stand up

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    almost everyone in this thread needs to go more simple.

    havent posted anything in a bit. crits always appreciated





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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    You got a fresh style developing. Try to fill your negative space in the N and A on the nark piece.

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    thanks man, took a while of fucking around to get. and as for the nark piece, thats only the rough on, ima try and fill that space somehow on the good one
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
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    boredom simple. crits?


    tasty- that Kunt piece is fillth, the Nark is getting there, you just gotta smooth some bars out and pull it together like you did the KUNT piece.
    chen- you should draw more
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    should've got rud of those bars:/
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    yeah dude i wish i did, coulda looked perty funky. gunna leave it till next time
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    haha i was taln bout mine ^_^ but yours too! lol
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