Cool you don't like the handstyle. Not what im wanting crits on. How about critting the actual work Ffs.
Dave - Nice work. On the top one that E needs work. The bottom one that last letter which I think is a R. You can't even really tell what it is because it is so covered by the extra detailing and drips. I wouldn't have put that many drips between the left and right leg. It makes it blend to much. Bolden up that outline. You can tell you are putting in time on the work. Keep it up.