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    I really need to stop rushing these... =/

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    No, you just need to make cleaner lines. It's all practice.

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    What do you reckon to my sketch Phil? Went back to simpler style, and really worked hard on structural integrity... Too many breaks?

    (I also accepted my place as toy )

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    It's not that there are too many, there's too much space between your breaks. Make them less exaggerated, and it'll look better. Make your P bend like the Y. The A should be completed on the bottom, or else it looks like some weird letter that doesn't exist. And try not to sketch your letters. Use single, clean lines. It'll help you when you're painting, too.

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    Yeh I made some adjustments already - it's sketched because I was trying really hard to get structure right. I'm gonna rub it right back and go again in clean single lines. I have fixed the a, I might have to do some work on the curves. There is so much more to getting this shit looking just right than I realised. I now realise what a fucking toy I am lol

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    You think the chip on the bottom of the a curl needs to go and that should link?



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    Now I inked the outline, I realize what you were saying about the breaks. I fucked up the Y because it doesn't look like one anymore...


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    for the battle thread

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    Coloured it - made a pigs ear of it. Looks shit. Still, i learnt how to balls up decent structure with breaks. Onwards and upwards.


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    lil ruff draft warm up today. need to do this type stuff more often na mean.

    wonky - not bad bad bro, drop the extra stuff for now. keep the letters solid.

    crushin - allways unique

    syn - you might try getting consistant letters before adding on color and 3d
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    tryin to get this shit right side up... wtf
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    crits?
    lolwut

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    That last kirsty is fresh
    I Was Rockin Snap Backs Before Mac Miller Did.

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    ok, so i literally started learning graffiti about an hour and a half ago so dont expect perfection (ive seen so many pretentious and arrogant posts here from 'eletists')

    but yeah, its pretty generic but i aint done it long enough to adopt my own style and flow yet


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    crits please
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    ^^ work in progress

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    a little something from Lebanon.....

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    lovin fuckin around with straights lately, the shadinf on the y is fucked a bit, and the left bar of the y kinda fucked up too, but any crits?

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    The R fucks up the flow. Chicken bone nowison.

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    yeah im not gonna do that extension on the r anymore, i was just trying it out. how are my other letters though?

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    Chicken Bone?

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